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Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2017 3:59 PM Title: Children's talks

Wow, that was both scary and awesome to see Shannon lash out to her mother. I wonder if this will permanently change something between them or that her mother will fall back to her old ways and try to take it out on Alejandro.

Also a bit sad to see how worried Lindsey is about her brother and that she is so sad that she has never been bonded.

Thank you for writing, and happy holidays to you too! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

BTW: why is there this list of Google translate languages in the chapters?



Author's Response:

Thanks ! 

I like to explore darker tones but I don't think that I'll let Alexis threaten Alejandro and neither would Shannon ! Lindsey is kind of a sad story because she only knew the sad and cynical Alejandro, not thz happier kid he was. She is protective of him, and in the same time she is a little sister who doesn't want to lose her elder sibling.

For the rubbish Google trad in the chapter I don't know from where it comes from. I'll correct all chapters after Christmas, don't worry 😁 

 

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