Date: December 16 2017 9:33 AM Title: Minors' rights
"Would you bathe with me?"....Kinda pushing your luck huh, Shannon?
I might have to write the second part of that special....I'm getting a LOT of insight into Al &Shan's characters here. Alejandro might be too good a person. No way Shannon deserves any pity or second chances! He's better than Izzy! She wouldn't have that shit at all! Keep your crocodile tears!! I mean he found her sex messages! Where did he get this patience?!
Also very sound reasoning on Mrs. 88 year old widow with four kids. Not sure how appealing that would be or if it would workout but I applaud the logic.
One again....*deep breath* GET YOUR SHIT TOGETHER, SHANNON!
Author's Response:
Well, remember that he also saw how she helped others and cared about them and their families. Without it he would just have been disgusted. But he also was worried about her silence. Alejandro tends to imagine the worst really fast, so not hearing anything from Shannon during almost two hours, he begun to lose it. And Shannon truly was distraught, she's just quite unused to feeling this much for a minor (or even anyone). Next chapter should be fully from her point of view, but it may come later than usual, considering that tomorrow I'll go see the Last Jedi and then I'll spent the afternoon with my girlfriend :)
Thanks for applauding the reasoning. It felt rather logical to me that such a MAJOR would try it. Plus, she would have some serious arguments : experienced, still young enough MAJOR-wise to be beautiful and bear children and sexually adept with minors. Plus the added bonus of "you don't have to worry about me meeting someone else after you", it could attract some peoples ^^
[Report This]Date: December 16 2017 7:11 AM Title: Minors' rights
Things are really happening fast, and I like it. It’s been both sexy and interesting seeing Shannon fight for control and lose control.
Alejandro has really been the fascinating character. While I applaud and enjoy his independence and his snarkiness, it has been really rewarding to see him be more sensitive and accommodating toward Shannon. Yes, I would the first to argue that she needs to hear “no” more often, he shows he’s the “bigger” person by not kicking her when she’s down. It really feels like he could have destroyed her, broken her in her misery and yet he was gentle and uplifting. Even if she’s the one that lifted him.
The story with Lindsay was sweet and shows Alejandro’s gentle and giving nature. While he can see the biggies as the dangers they are, he can also see their vulnerabilities and frailties. I certainly don’t want to see him give them too many breaks, but I am in awe of his empathy, now that he’s dealing them outside his family.
A wonderful, layered characterization. Thank you for your wonderful work.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot ! Quite honestly, this work here helps me when I work on my personnal project. Hopefully, my characters will come as layered there than in Dance with Fire ^^ !