[Report This]Date: December 14 2017 1:48 PM Title: Burning passions
Shannon doesn't know Alejandro at all and it truly shows in this chapter. Yeah! She went too far! That's obvious. What's really terrifying though....well despite her terrifying display of sexual intensity and desire...is her casual indifference. She can try and justify it all she wants (riding high on the wave of impending orgasm makes any number of thoughts swarm your head) BUT!!!! She targeted his work bench from the beginning. Of course she doesn't it's true value, how he built it himself, but even worse than physically destroying it was her dismissal of it's relevance. "I'll buy him one later!" No you won't. Sorry Shannon. There's not enough money in the world. Not to mention you kind of wrecked his room and maybe flooded in "you". That's just icing. This relationship has a long way to go. If it goes anywhere after this.
BAD SHANNON. GET YOUR SHIT TOGETHER!!! Alejandro deserves soo much better than an overgrown, spoiled, rich girl!
Author's Response:
Haha, yeah Shannon fucked big time... Pun not intended. The next chapter, due tomorrow morning (French time) will probably surprise you. I made use off how I felt after a huge depression, years ago, when sorting my feelings was hard. But you'll see how Alejandro will deal with his own 😆
Date: December 14 2017 12:06 PM Title: Burning passions
Here we see the other side of Shannon, her private side. I would never have taken her for being a sadistic hard to handle lover for Majors, she seemed dominant but never so much that she would harm others. To see a hidden side is interesting, it changes the way I'll think about their relationship, and it's future. I had to re-read the chapter to make sure I not only understood the twist but to make sure that I was reading her delusions right. She's so sure of their relationship, that she is already imagining the bond sex. Imagining it, and losing control was a great setup. This was a beautifully charged chapter, I cannot wait for how Alejandro will cope as well as what Shannon will do.
Author's Response:
Truth been told, she is only sadistic with MAJORS, mainly because they can take it, but also because of how violent they and their society can be... She wouldn't willingly hurt Alejandro... She would lost it if he ended bruised, even slightly during their love-making session