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Reviewer: Tigernach Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 30 2018 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 2: Jacobstown

Your story is progressing well, BUT... you definitely need to work on your spelling and grammar. Particularly, the differences in words that seem the same, but are spelled differently (then / than; there / their; etc.),leaving out words to improve word flow and meaning. Also, don't forget capitalization rules... First words, proper nowns, places and people, etc.

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