Date: March 30 2018 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 2: Jacobstown
Your story is progressing well, BUT... you definitely need to work on your spelling and grammar. Particularly, the differences in words that seem the same, but are spelled differently (then / than; there / their; etc.),leaving out words to improve word flow and meaning. Also, don't forget capitalization rules... First words, proper nowns, places and people, etc.
Date: March 30 2018 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 1: Vault 7
I think you have found a new way to introduce giantism into a story, and that is always worth a congratulatory cheer! Keep up the good work, and you will be on your way to becoming a new favorite author.
Try a little harder to maintain the quality of your spelling and grammar. They are great indicators of your effort, and make the story even more enjoyable.
Date: December 08 2017 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 1: Vault 7
I just finish londsome road and start read this. Reading was fun and I hope to see more of your crazy story.
Thanks, Londsome Road was one of my favorites, but suprisingly Dead money was my favorite DLC