Reviewer: NotSirk Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04 2017 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 : Nightmare of a distant past

......Wow!....Okay let's do this!

First: How did Jessica a side character to a side character only briefly in ONE chapter get a mention?! Snub! Izzy got snubbed!

Besides that I'm impressed with the world building. Things like Alejandro's birth or MAJORS fighting over tv size and childishly claiming him! That's good. And bond raped! Wow! I need to see how that went down. It is something that can happen! I won't cover it more than you've seen though. Kinda clashes with the more light hearted tone of my story.

Speaking of Alejando! Like no joke Izzy would love him! Fun fact: She lost her right arm in Small the debut story she also stars in. Sooo that's a coincidence! If ever there were a minor worth meeteing! She'd probably hate him at first though. He'd steal her thunder! 

Ummm I really don't know what to say except I want to know more about him. And you might be a better writer than me! I'm gonna give it another read!

Author's Response:

Thanks ! Don't worry about Izzy, she'll have a mention very soon, and an important one at that !

I didn't know she had lost an arm in a previous story. Alejandro and her could bond over it haha ! As for the writing part... turth been told, I try to become a Fantasy writer and thus have written a lot (350+ A4 pages) of story prior to this, it helps. But man, it is hard writing it in English and not French !