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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2017 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 3

But that is real fun for some of us!

Reviewer: romaescipion Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2017 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 3

estoy deseando leer como sera la relacion de shannon y alejandro,Un saludo y enhorabuena

Reviewer: TehZach Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2017 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 3

You're waaay overusing the words foot funk in this. You should be more creative and describe it better



Author's Response:

I went back though and changed it up in some places.  "Foot funk" is now only in two places I believe.  Honestly didn't even realize how much I used it until you pointed this out.

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