Date: December 08 2017 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 3
You're waaay overusing the words foot funk in this. You should be more creative and describe it better
I went back though and changed it up in some places. "Foot funk" is now only in two places I believe. Honestly didn't even realize how much I used it until you pointed this out.
Date: December 08 2017 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story so far. I’ve increasingly become a fan of giant couples stories like this. I really hope that the tiny wimp is used during a nice slow footjob at some point. And for your other story, Family Punishment, I’d just have the mom keep him underfoot one day until he’s sweat and scrunched away into nothing.
Date: December 05 2017 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm really liking how this story is starting, this one is looking like it's gonna be a giantess world classic. Would love a scene where Mike is trapped inside one of Kendall's high heels while she's wearing them
Date: December 05 2017 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
So far, so good! The reveal and humiliation so far are top notch, and I'm really liking how Kendall's character is developing. Jake having more pills has me wondering if those will come into play somehow later on. Also with Kendall being an athletic-type and her hair noted as reaching down to her armpits, I'm kind of hoping that Mike will subjected to some underarm torture from her, but either way I'm really enjoying the story and can't wait to see what else is in store for him!
Date: December 03 2017 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love a good cuckold/revenge story, and the setup for this is incredible! I like the unusual element of Jake being the one to initiate the events. I hope that the two of them put him to good use during the course of the story.
Date: December 03 2017 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love this so far. Can't wait to see some action. Personally I like the idea of Kendall keeping Mike between her ass cheeks while her and Jake have sex, resulting in him getting slammed and crushed as her hips are bucking and whatnot. Then after they're done Kendall keeps him as a toy for herself.