Date: December 03 2017 4:42 AM Title: Classroom Trouble
Fun story. Nice build up. A possible idea. Same basic scenario but he's standing in the isles between the seats and the teacher, Mrs.Nelson walks down the isle handing out papers. You know the rest.
Date: December 03 2017 12:49 AM Title: Classroom Trouble
Interesting read. Did a good job of recreating the enviornment and the actions of Julie. Was able to paint a clear image of what was going on no problem. I'd also like to add how refreshing it is to read a story with above average vocabulary, though I must admit that for a normal reader your choice of vocab could actually cause some confusion, and a trip to the dictionary, so I'd recommend toning it down just a tad, but otherwise I enjoyed the read.