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Reviewer: Benja999 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14 2019 11:36 AM Title: Day 0 - Rude Awakening

So glad you continue this story.

Love the new chapter. Cant wait to see her shrink far enough to be used by her friends.

 

Please keep going and thank you



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Technically speaking, she is already small enough to be used by them. It's just that at the moment her attitude regarding this is rather positive and her friends genuinely care about her. In which ways this may change in the future remains to be seen.

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14 2019 11:15 AM Title: Day 3 - Socrates, or something

Very well written with great characters, looking forward to things getting into gear.  Thanks for writing



Author's Response:

Thanks for your support!

Reviewer: Lucia1312 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2018 11:05 AM Title: Day 2 - Making Plans

When are you going to update?

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Date: March 09 2018 4:03 PM Title: Day 2 - An Apple a Day

I love how this is going! When are you going to update the next chapter? And maybe make Ash a girl?



Author's Response:

Thank you! Later this week maybe? I currently have a couple of free weeks, so I may be able to pop out a couple more chapters in that time. Next chapter should be fairly short though, with it being mostly a wrap-up for day 2 and setting-up the proper introduction to Maryam's friends.

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: March 07 2018 7:08 PM Title: Day 2 - An Apple a Day

Cool story so far, the protagonist has a real voice and you know your way around a sentence.

Ash being male would be fun, not a lot of Mf content around here.

Looking forward to the world you're building.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Most that have commented seem to gravitate more towards only females, but I'm gonna keep the posibility of some M/f content, open.

Reviewer: Doll_Size_Girl Signed [Report This]
Date: March 07 2018 2:44 AM Title: Day 2 - An Apple a Day

Strictly female would be pretty nice for this story :) I look forward to the rest, I hope you make more soon.

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Date: December 04 2017 2:59 AM Title: Day 0 - Rude Awakening

looking forward to this!

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