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Reviewer: Lucia1312 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 09 2018 4:03 PM Title: Day 2 - An Apple a Day

I love how this is going! When are you going to update the next chapter? And maybe make Ash a girl?

Author's Response:

Thank you! Later this week maybe? I currently have a couple of free weeks, so I may be able to pop out a couple more chapters in that time. Next chapter should be fairly short though, with it being mostly a wrap-up for day 2 and setting-up the proper introduction to Maryam's friends.

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: March 07 2018 7:08 PM Title: Day 2 - An Apple a Day

Cool story so far, the protagonist has a real voice and you know your way around a sentence.

Ash being male would be fun, not a lot of Mf content around here.

Looking forward to the world you're building.

Author's Response:

Thanks! Most that have commented seem to gravitate more towards only females, but I'm gonna keep the posibility of some M/f content, open.

Reviewer: Doll_Size_Girl Signed [Report This]
Date: March 07 2018 2:44 AM Title: Day 2 - An Apple a Day

Strictly female would be pretty nice for this story :) I look forward to the rest, I hope you make more soon.

Reviewer: aknouh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2017 2:59 AM Title: Day 0 - Rude Awakening

looking forward to this!

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