Date: December 01 2017 5:09 AM Title: Awakening
Waking up to see Mrs. Fletcher's gigantic face was great. Her voice would be sooo loud. Like a Goddess. I can only imagine her voice when she raises it. He is frightened by her, as well he should be. Giantesses are massively huge and yet incredibly fast to tiny people.
After Mrs. Fletcher fabulous hand ride she set him on the floor. The enormous power of each of her feet as her shoes hit the floor was Awesome. I can only imagine the loudness and floor vibrations of each of her steps.
This is very realistic and well done. Will Mrs. Fletcher maybe get a babysitter, her niece? Will a lady neighbor discover him accidentally?
Love this,
Diesel
[Report This]Date: December 01 2017 3:20 AM Title: Awakening
What an amazing concept. I'm immediately drawn to these characters. They are not only very likeable but act in a way that seems plausible. But honestly I can't really just pick one reason. I love the Sci Fi aspect with tiny clones that are under no circumstances to be seen by the tiny(I hope that was a bit of foreshadowing). I cannot wait to see what happens with Kirsten at work. But it's amazing how well you write gentle but you've written the violent humiliation stuff rather well.
aaron
PS Does Julian still eat like a regular person of does he have weird space paste or something? Also the name Biosleeve sounds badass. Great choice.
Author's Response:
Wow, thanks! I'm glad you really like the idea. Full disclosure, it's going to turn dark after a bit, the seed of this idea was "How can I have a protagonist get crushed without ending the story?" I hope that doesn't diminish your enthusiasm for the story, and there will be a lot of character development going along with that.
As for your question, Julian can eat normal food, but in most cases it's too big so he'll have something like Soylent provided for him by Kirsten.