Date: March 24 2018 4:54 PM Title: Gathering together
I just wanted to start off by saying this is best Giantess story I have ever read, hands down. Hats off to you my friend.
Anyways, I'm thoroughly excited to see how Justine will rule over the town in her capacity as Queen. Personally, I don't have a whole lot of sympathy for them. Justine can be cruel but She has a concious. I think She'll be able to strike a balance between keeping Her subjects in line and letting her darker side run wild. She definately needs to establish Her authority first.
Author's Response:
Wow, thank's for the praise! Not every day someone say's your work is the best hands down.
Hope you like the next chapter and thanks again for the review.
Date: March 23 2018 12:37 PM Title: Gathering together
Hey it actually is March 23, 2018 like in the first chapter.
The townspeople don't seem to be getting much sympathy, however in their defense they just spent the last few days wondering about their missing loved ones only to find them crushed into gross smears, or worse having to see their digested remains knowing that they were swallowed alive, died in fear and agony, and pooped out like they were nothing more than waste. The families of Brad, James, and his girlfriend, must feel justified in their anger and despair. The priest himself is only doing what he thinks is best for the town, and must be pretty traumatized after spending a day watching local men dig through Justine's feces for human remains and belongings. In his mind, only some sort of satanic intervention makes sense for the horrors of the last few days, and who can blame him. Christina was just doing what she had to do to avoid being burnt alive, it was cowardly but not totally villainous.
Justine is going to arrive just in time to make the save, put out the fires, and disarm the mob. She seems to be trying to make ammends and be more tolerant of the regular people. I do hope that this recent character development for Justine sticks, and that while she can still do things to keep the townspeople in line, she listens to Mark and tries not to kill, like how she spared the knights in the previous chapter. Her trying to make ammends with John even if he wasn't ready to himself in the previous chapter was a touching scene. I hope that Justine can somewhat understand the grief of the families of those she killed, and continue to try to make ammends after she presumably takes over the town. It will be interesting to see how Kevin responds, he will probably have to come to terms that Justine killed some people, but if she disarms the mob while resisting the urge to kill them he could probably come to the conclusion that his sister is still mostly good.
Author's Response:
Sorry I didn't respond to your review before you wrote this one so this will be a kind of a two for one response.
I agree the towns people didn't get much sympathy, but I didn't expect them to seem morally gray to most people considering their choice to bring harm to those not responsible for their plight. I was kind of surprised sympathy for Christina was so easily crushed though.
What happens to Priest Wesley once he encounter's what he believes is a direct result of satanic intervention is set to challenge or embolden his hostile belief's toward Justine depending on his state of mind and her own actions. As for Kevin's reaction some might find the next chapter reveals some ink dripping into his character.
The funny part about the Mandela Effect is that it started due people remembering Nelson Mandela dying and then being alive with the world indifferent to what they remembered happening. So Marvin could just show up and nearly no one remember that he died or went missing in the first place. But invoking that plot device to do such a thing would likely ruin the impact of Justine's choices so I have decided the lab from the first chapter won't effect the timeline of the story like that.
As an interesting note on the date chosen in the story I actually created a basic outline for this story back in January of 2017 and listed March of that year as the date. Didn't end up using the plot idea until toward the end of 2017 so I just changed the year the starting lab event occurred in.
Date: March 17 2018 2:31 PM Title: Gathering together
I hope she saves Sarah and eats Christina
Author's Response:
It would be quite ironic if Christina got eaten after all the hoops her mind has jumped though worrying about it.
Thanks for the feedback and hope you enjoy the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: March 10 2018 8:50 PM Title: Gathering together
Okay now I'm going to try to keep this brief for a change. Like I've been kind of sympathetic to the townspeople so far y'know. I like Justine and want her to succeed but I've also called her out on the unspeakable shit she's done. Well that changes now! Fuck these citizens. They don't disserve to even pick through Justine's fecal waste! And fuck Christina! I reallllly felt for her too! It's gonna be hard to comeback from this one. If she even lives long enough. Justine's an eat first then feel guilty about it later but not enough to vomit you back up kind of giantess. I'm on team takeover!
Author's Response:
Chapter 24 posted, so team takeover can cheer Justine on to victory! Be prepared though, it's a bit of a long ride.