[Report This]Date: January 08 2018 6:05 PM Title: Kevin's denial
Wow you have no fear in putting your characters through a gauntlet of emotionns!
Justine still struggling with her humanity and the guilt of living with the lives she's taken
Kevin in denial at the reality of his sister's crimes and transformation
Christina struggling with the fear of her friend and the responsibility of Kevin
And of course John consumed with grief and rage contemplating killing a paralyzed man
Just.....damn.
It really feels like all the characters are at a crossroadsin development and that soon they'll vecome different people entirely. Whether they end up better are worse is up to you. What's clear is that none of them are the people they were at the beginning of this tale. This has been a very riveting read and maybe a little underated on this site.
Author's Response:
I think the issue is the fact I didn't put as much effort into the story when I wrote the first few chapters as I do now and becuase that is what most people see they don't read the rest. Even taking that into account I didn't expect that many people to enjoy the story and feel lucky for the support it's gotten so far.
Thank you again for the praise of story so far and hope you enjoy the next chapter I just posted.