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Reviewer: officerkc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2018 5:58 PM Title: The least they could do is be her breakfast

Love this story. Sometimes I have to go back and read to remind myself this isn't present day lol. 

 

I like how you can see everyone's rationale. Will Justine continue her monstrous path? Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

I hope that doesn't mean I haven't done well at keeping in theme with the era the story takes place in.

Thanks for the praise of the story and hope you like the next chapter.

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2018 3:38 AM Title: The least they could do is be her breakfast

Well. This chapter was fantastic and very important. I think Justine has turned the corner into monsterdom. Before this her action could be argued (just a little) but eating a groveling mother trying to protect her son after thoroughly breaking her spirit first...AND enjoying it?! Nope that's pretty bad. And she's gonna eat John anyway. It's been a slow and methodical transformation and I love it! It's not even over yet! She was still hesitant. How long before even that small shred of conscious disappears? I would like to see more of her caring side though because I do believe Justine still has the capacity for it and that adds to her character and actually makes this story a bit tragic. In a day the worlds turned her from an abused girl trying to take care of her brother to a giant cow stealing, murdering, cannibal and if just a few things had went differently. If John and his mom had offered to help, If Christina hadn't lied about James, If John had stood up against his mom. Maybe Justine would've turned the more benevolent route. It might be too late now. What is Kevin gonna think of all this?

John is still alive though so there might be some hope! Although even if she decides to spare him and not swallow him as an after bathroom break snack I don't see him getting over her eating his mom. He probably does want to kill her now! I don't think he really did before but that's in the past now so oh well?

Also just a side note. Fantastic swallowing descriptions. Not really reading this story for the vore aspect but it's enjoyable so that helps.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the praise on this chapter. I also agree Justine has allowed herself to become quite twisted.

A chapter showing her more caring side will be coming soon that might open a path away from monsterdom.

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