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Reviewer: whackamole1 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29 2017 6:07 AM Title: The witch hunting party of 13

I hope Justine does decide to spare John and his mother, they're local people who she has known for a long time, they were only trying to defend their livelihood, and unlike Brad, John isn't a coward, refusing to abandon his stricken family member. I can see Justine severly punishing them, but not outright killing them. Perhaps she can humilate them as they lie in front of her, she will also surely be taking away the rest of their cattle as a penalty.

I like the descriptions of those struggling in Justine's stomach. They get to witness Justine's rampage from the inside, and they tend to last a while in there provided she doesn't fill her belly with water. It makes sense, since considering how big she is, there should still be some air, even if it's stifling hot and smelly in there. Considering that Brad and the cattle that she ate yesterday are now in her huge intestines, that hunter is going to spend a while in her now empty stomach. Unless she takes a drink.

So far keeping score she has swallowed alive 5 people, 4 are dead and in her intestines, 1 is still alive and just arrived in her stomach. She has also crushed 6 others, bringing her body count to 10 dead and 1 likely soon to be dead.

Author's Response:

My guess is that hunter really wishes he didn't join the "party" having ended up in Justine's stomach. In the new chapter I just posted humilation will be showing up, also the swallowed alive count will be going up.

Thanks again for your support and I hope you enjoy the update.

Reviewer: officerkc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2017 9:18 PM Title: The witch hunting party of 13

Really a fun chapter. Showing her power after getting attacked. Is she getting more comfortable her power? Love seeing updates with this story! 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review and hope you enjoy the next update.

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed [Report This]
Date: December 28 2017 7:07 PM Title: The witch hunting party of 13

Well I can't say those people didn't get what they deserved. 

You really capture the motivations of these characters. It's easy to dislike the townspeople because Justine's the main character but I find myself sympathizing with all parties involved. Justine's defending herself from being assaulted and they're trying to protect their property and family. I'm really interested in what will happen to John. He seemed like he might actually have more understanding and empathy than everyone else. Really feels like he's just stuck in a rough situation. I don't really like his mom though.

Justine seems to be liking the taste of human. I wonder what she'll turn into? She's become increasingly desensitized to killing. I'd say part of her might even enjoy it a bit. I'm especially eager for a reunion with Kevin. Will he even recognize his sister or only see the monster she's getting dangerously close to becoming? Still thinking of ways for Justine to feed herself. Mind goes to some sort of agricultural solution but that's more long term and doesn't solve the right now. Plus the amount of free space needed. A whole region devoted to just feeding her. Other logistical things like who's growing them? I don't think Justine knows how to farm.

Other things too. Like Justine's hunger seems slightly disproportionate to her size. She ate two deer, five whole cows, and a handful of humans last night and she still woke up hungry before they'd even finished digesting. How much does she need to eat? What can she eat? Normal humans can't eat raw food without getting sick. Someone really does need to do some research on her. Probably won't happen with everyone trying to kill her tough...too bad.



Author's Response:

With Kevin a number of thing's could happen, he could enbrace who his sister has become, reject her as a monster or deny she has done anything wrong. What path he will choose is something I have been wondering myself. If he does come to reject her as a monster he no longer recognizes as his sister, it wouldn't be an easy choice for him at all and Justine's reaction to that outcome would likely be quite heart breaking.

On the other hand Kevin embracing not only Justine killing people, but her eating them alive would be nearly impossbile as it be against his morals values and who he thought she was.

Lastly Kevin rejecting what he hears about Justine depending on who and how they tell him is also not going to be easy as time goes on for a number of reasons.

As for Justine's hunger I plan on later chapters explaining things in a bit more detail.

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