Date: November 06 2021 2:27 AM Title: The Secret Lab screw up
I definitely enjoyed the story will she she Explorer sexual desires?
Date: November 05 2021 10:49 AM Title: The Secret Lab screw up
I hope this story will continue great to see it back?? Or was it a double post
Author's Response: Chapter 30 is new. I plan for the story to continue. Hope you enjoyed reading it so far.
[Report This]Date: August 18 2021 5:12 PM Title: The Secret Lab screw up
I miss this story like you wouldn't believe.
The details are so juicy much like the "animals" Justine eats. Even the bodily actions are mesmerizing to read about when enhanced to such a degree.
The whole place is falling apart. And I loved devouring the words you've written.
I wish there could be more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Glad you liked it. And who knows I might push an update at some point.
[Report This]Date: December 27 2020 6:15 PM Title: The Secret Lab screw up
This was a really good read, I finished the whole thing from start to end in less than two evening. I really like how you describe the emotional anguish and moral dilemmas the characters face. I could also see how your writing skills improved with each chapter. There are some minor spelling and grammar errors (e.g. "fowl" instead of "foul") but they didn't detract from the story.
But most of all I loved Justine. She's both very sexy and very believable (including her nascent vore fetish). I think that, all things considered, she's actually a very kind and forgiving person; she has done horrible things and has shown the darker side of her character, but I'd also say she has a lot more self-control and compassion than most other people would have were they in the same place, seeing how much injustice she has suffered. It's a nice change from all those stories where the the protagonist almost instantly loses any sort of moral compass and becomes like Godzilla after she grows.
Would be about time for Justine to get some clothes, though; it must really suck to sleep naked out in the open when one is her size.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: May 05 2018 5:09 AM Title: The Secret Lab screw up
It seems that the entire town never learns that they cannot overpower Justine.
They get beaten down and slaugthered every time and yet the idiots keep trying,
which is of course very amusing for us, but this way they will wipe their own town from the map, but yeah maybe Justine would eventually eat the town of the map anyway.
Thank you for updating the story, I'm still enjoying it.
Author's Response:
Glad your still enjoying it and thank you for the review.
[Report This]Date: December 21 2017 3:02 PM Title: The Secret Lab screw up
That entire town will be gone by the time Justine is done.
Thank you for writing this story!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review and hope you enjoy the next chapter posted.
Date: December 05 2017 12:53 AM Title: The Secret Lab screw up
"The only thing I know about it is that whatever goes in only comes out brown and fowl smelling so I bet he is really going to suffer in there just like he should after all that he has done to me."
Nice realistic touch remembering that this is a country girl from the 1600's so she doesn't really know how the digestive system works, only knowing the basics of in and out. She seems mean enough that she will enjoy pushing out the brown and smelly partially digested remains of her victims. She would probably enjoy that kind of power of being able to swallow alive (dominate) and poop out (humilate) anyone who pisses her off too much. But she should be wary not to over play her hand since an army from this time can still kill her. Gunpowder and Canons etc. Maybe she'll try to make some allies and prove herself useful like in Gulliver's travels.
Author's Response:
I have been trying my best to stay within the theme of the 1600's so it's good to hear I made some solid realistic touches.
I do think some allies would be a good idea, but I can't say for sure what I will do on that front. During the late 1600's guns weren't super common yet so it's going to a mix of possbile threats, but I would agree that the canon would be the most threatening to her.