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Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2018 5:07 PM Title: Emily

I really liked to foot chapter. It was really great how she used her stink to dominate and degrade him. I’d like to see an ending where he’s forced to smell those same feet until he dies.

Reviewer: vortex Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2018 12:52 AM Title: Emily

very good start! hope that at the end, he ends up in the belly of one of his sister😀

Reviewer: Gershwin Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2018 7:31 AM Title: Emily

It's ok, but it's got a lot of spelling, grammar and general writing errors. I found it fairly hard to read overall. The dialogue feels unnatural and forced.

Note: I am a rather harsh critic! Sorry!

Reviewer: frankstergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2018 4:37 AM Title: Zoey

Really enjoy this story, glad to see it updated :) supprised it hasnt gotten more revews.

lookforward to seeing more!



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