Date: November 27 2017 11:38 AM Title: Adoptive
Since I am a fan of the more 'gentle' stories, I applaude your abilities to also write 'PG' stories as well. I have enjoyed some of your writing, most noticeably your 'Vacation Abroad'. It was obvious that you had researched the middle-eastern cultures at least well enough to make your readers feel at home in the storly. I hope you will do more such stories in the future.
Whenever I do a story involving another culture, I do my best to represent the culture fairly and positively. I'm happy I got that right, it was a huge concern going into those stories.
It's nice to write a PG story for a change. I just wondered what the reception would be since shorter stories are usually expected to be more sexual.
Date: November 25 2017 6:59 AM Title: Adoptive
I don't know what to say except that I really liked this one! I am curious at how Aiyanna got so big too? Did she master painting with all the colors of the wind or something? Haha....that line made no sense in that movie.