Reviews For A new "Toy"
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Reviewer: Fertility goddess loli lilith Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25 2017 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 1

I wouldn't say my version is 11/10 as you did, the description isn't much better. I don't know what authors here write good physical descriptions or how to describe the curves of body parts and what they would look like at that size. I'm glad I could help you with writing some but I'm not having much fun doing writing these, so I think I will quit. 

Reviewer: Fertility goddess loli lilith Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22 2017 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

Not alot of detail, good progression though. I hope you don't mind, I wrote the first half my own version.

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