Reviews For Inescapable Crush
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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2017 11:26 AM Title: Inescapable Crush

This has some promise!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it! Promise in what direction?

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2017 9:03 PM Title: Inescapable Crush

Well this story was short, sweet, funny, and entertaining. Too bad about that car though, but I think Mike's the type of guy to have insurance. These characters and interactions were really fun I especially like Mike. That shinrinyoku line makes me think he's a closet weeb. I don't know, I kinda feel bad for Delia. Unrequited love is tough. 



Author's Response:

That's good, Delia shouldn't be an unsympathetic character. She has a fixation on a little man for reasons she doesn't understand, but she doesn't question it either. She acts on it. It's very disruptive to Mike's life, but he would miss her if she disappeared. I'm glad you enjoyed the story! It was especially fun to write.

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