Date: December 08 2018 5:36 AM Title: Madison's birthday present
Really hoping you keep continuing this. This story is actually the reason I even created this account, because I wanted to leave you a review on this story. Thank you for this contribution and I cannot wait to see what happens next!!
Date: November 25 2018 9:46 PM Title: The next chapter
Super thars the only word I can remember after reading this
Author's Response: Thx again! Appreciate your enthusiasm :)
Date: November 22 2018 3:04 AM Title: Madison's birthday present
Super story after a long time
Author's Response:
Thx!
Glad you like it!
More on the way for sure :)
[Report This]Date: November 22 2018 1:41 AM Title: Madison's birthday present
Wow, great chapter... I know I say it a lot but I cannot wait for God Sophie to just go nuts.. hopefully that is coming!! either way awesome job!
Author's Response:
Thx Kilobug!
I truly don't care how many times you say it :)
Glad you like the story!
Appreciate the words.
Date: November 21 2018 5:43 PM Title: Madison's birthday present
Come on the Human and Liliputen societies are so advanced and with the Lilies be even more so that they haven't synthizined Nerve Agent. Some Sarin or VX (about 20 gallons worth to be sure) would down any Giant/giantess, Bypasses barriers since it appears to the skin and nerves as something the nerves need, then kills, heck their are mercury compounds even smaller and deadlier and just as able to bypass, if you want to make a point to the giants every time they F with one of you cities they are at best neruolgically crippled at worst every one involved on their side is DEAD! Your going to lose a 100,000 anyway to Sophie or her daughter might as well make them pay! Enough dead or crippled Bonbargions and the rest will think twice or not attack at all. Best play for the tinies and could turn the tide of war for humans. Basically compounds taking early industrail age tech would hurt and/or kill the largest of giants, it's in their capicity prehaps in this story they will use them.
Author's Response:
Interesting notion those nerve gasses.
Maybe the Lilli's still have something up their sleeve, or maybe not ;)
We will find out.
Thx for the review!
Appreciate it!
Date: November 20 2018 7:28 AM Title: The Brobdingnagian girl
really liked the story
Author's Response:
Thx!
Appreciate it!
More is on the way!
Date: October 26 2018 8:24 AM Title: The Brobdingnagian girl
Funny, I only really follow this story for the parts involving Sophie and Lillies, although I liked the parts with Melanie in this chapter. Seems like you've done a good job at appealing to different audiences!
Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thx!
The fact that my story apparently attracts various readers with different preferences feels indeed as a compliment!
And do not worry, I can assure you that Sophie hasn't even begun warming up yet ;)
Appreciate the kind words!
Date: October 26 2018 8:18 AM Title: The Brobdingnagian girl
I love it! Keep going! :)
Author's Response:
Thx!
Glad you like it and thx for the trouble to let me hear your thoughts!
Date: October 25 2018 11:42 PM Title: The Brobdingnagian girl
I really love the Madison/Claire/Kelvin side of the story. To be honest, that's pretty much the only reason I follow this story. And this thing with Denise could get super interesting, so I'm really looking forward to seeing how it goes. Good job!
Author's Response:
Thx for your kind words!
Appreciate it!
Nice to hear you like the interaction between certain characters
Date: September 25 2018 5:54 PM Title: Sophieism
Man! This seems to be leading up to something good. Thank you for continuing the "God" aspect although I was expecting Sophie to just go crazy and do the whole "I am GOD" thing again... hope thats coming soon? This is for sure my favorite story!!
Author's Response:
Thx!
Its hard for me to respond on your question, cause I hate spoilers myself.
But have faith
I already have a whole script written out which I'm following
I'm building up to something...
And Sophie WILL shine
Thanks again for letting me know your thoughts kilobug, appreciate it.
Readers like you motivate me to continue this story or I would have left this story a long time ago.
[Report This]Date: September 07 2018 5:27 PM Title: Madison's birthday present
This was awesome!! Hope to see Spohie embrace being "God"
Author's Response: Thx for the review kilobug! I’ve got a feeling that you won’t be disappointed ;)
Date: September 07 2018 3:14 AM Title: Madison's birthday present
Thanks for your reply! And the flowers, I guess? If you continue Saturn Sevenn you see how NOT to do character development. I think I did okay in the genning but it then went everywhere at once, pendulum, all over the place.
I think it is a proven concept to make a character multi facetted, which is super hard to do. I can't do it on purpose, instead ending up making the characters schizophrenic, which then has to be resolved by making them mad.
Author's Response: Lol, flowers :) Your welcome! Well either way, I’m sure your story is great. Thx again for leaving a review on mine ;)
[Report This]Date: September 05 2018 4:50 AM Title: Madison's birthday present
Really cool story. I like it. Very believable characters that I'd love to hear more thoughts of. I don't really understand military people ever, but I guess you nailed them too. I'd love to hear more of their thoughts, understand why they do what they do.
There's a bit of an issue with formatting that you could fix. It's all squished together and hard to read and memorize. I jump lines often, even when I use the reader in Firefox. To fix it you can go double enter or something like that, but that sucks. I've found that making the format perfect in Word or Open Office Writer and then just copy-pasting is best. You can not use the preview function that way though, because it fucks up the formatting in the editor. Best of luck, can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Its an honor to receive a review from you
And a coincidence :)
Just started reading Saturn Seven a few days ago, ive only read like 3 chapters or so, but it looks very promising.
I always skipped it because I prefer micro/nano stories, but I thought, why don't give it a try, there has to be a reason why his story is so popular :)
I very much appreciate a good piece of writing for my enjoyment as well to learn from it.
I'm glad you mention the characters of my story. I always had the feeling that most readers here prefer raw gts action instead of in-depth and character development.
Nothing wrong with gts action though, but for me personally, a good build up to a climax and the knowledge of a characters intention and such adds some sort of extra dimension to the actual giantess action.
It makes the climax far more exciting. But maybe that's just me.
I will certainly continue reading your story and got a good feeling I can learn a lot of it regarding character development, so thanks for that in advance ;)
Good of you to point out about the formatting, I was never aware of that.
I usually just copy paste, and than use some enters here and there.
Thanks again and there is more to come ;)
Date: June 25 2018 6:39 PM Title: Girls just want to have fun
WOW. Best chapter yet. I hope you have more planned! I love the God theme for Sophie.. please continue that! "goddess" doesn't do her justice!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
More on the way!
LoL, yeah Sophie loves her power :)
[Report This]Date: June 25 2018 12:18 PM Title: Girls just want to have fun
Sophie... what a goddess. Truly never disappointed by your updates. Great stuff.
Author's Response:
Thanks man! There is more where that came from ;)
Date: May 17 2018 3:52 PM Title: Madison's birthday present
Terrific.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: May 17 2018 10:56 AM Title: Madison's birthday present
Stories that feature interaction between female brobdingnagians and male lilliputians are so hot. i love this. i see that butt tag, and i hope there's some butt stuff between a adult female brob and a poor tiny male lilly!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you like it!
Date: May 16 2018 12:04 AM Title: Madison's birthday present
First chapter started off promising; like a good multisize pet/owner story with possible unaware elements but then immediately became an incredibly boring and uninteresting mess of "plot" that is both unattactive and totally unnecessesary. It had potential.
Author's Response:
Hey Aaperture, thanks for the honest feedback.
I must say, chapter 2 is the chapter where I am the least proud of indeed.
If I could do it over, I would have definitely chosen for a different approach.
But, on the other hand, Its all part of the progress.
I'm only a novice writer who is very eager to improve his skills.
And feedback like this gives me information of how the reader experiences my story.
I take every review serious, not only the positive ones ;)
Its very helpful!
Date: May 09 2018 2:30 AM Title: Madison's birthday present
I'm liking this story quite a lot! I really can't wait to read more! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words Wholia! There is more to come!
[Report This]Date: May 08 2018 6:04 PM Title: Becoming friends
We NEED to see behind that door. Amazing as always.
Author's Response: Thanks for your time and trouble to let me know what you think Arkcrono, appreciate it as always.