[Report This]Date: November 17 2017 6:27 AM Title: A Rude Awakening
my ex got me into makeing stories to. I would suprise him with a story on the bed. Im only 19. Since we broke up the stories are for everyone else. I miss love.
Author's Response:
Eventually you will find love again. It may suck right now but it gives you time to find yourself and be happy with yourself. Ive found that love happens when you arent even looking.
[Report This]Date: November 15 2017 11:14 AM Title: A Rude Awakening
Oh my gosh!!! What is your resion for this great story. I love it!! I hate to say it but it turned me on a little.
Author's Response:
Funny story actually. I orginally started writing it for just my husband. He is the one who got me turned onto the wonderful world of gts stories. I decided to try to think of a plot really fast, with no pressure, and this is the result of what I came up with. I told him that since I was taking the time to actually write this short story, that I may as well post it online and share with others. He laughed and said ok. I made him wait to read it until I shared it online. I think he likes the suspense.
Date: November 13 2017 12:42 AM Title: A Rude Awakening
I enjoyed it very much. Nice set up. Will Miranda keep him in a container at home? An aquarium or a dollhouse? Some of it seems rushed but overall I like it. Looking forward to the boss. Will she be as sympathetic, hope not.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
I cannot really answer this without giving the story away. Drew is not sure whether this will permanent or not and Miranda is just going with the flow. Who knows what may happen though. :)
Date: November 12 2017 2:21 PM Title: A Rude Awakening
Very nice so far. A bit tricky to read with no paragraphs nor spellcheck; but the story line thus far is one of those classic fantasies we come here for. I can't wait for the next chapter. Great work!
Author's Response:
I do apologize. I only have wordpad on my computer and I had all the correct spacing for paragraphs, but when I uploaded the story file it would only let me if it was in text only format. That changes any special editing I have done. I will go back and spell check though. Thank you for your review.
Date: November 08 2017 3:42 PM Title: A Rude Awakening
great start so far i really like it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!