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Reviewer: zhengguoguangxi Signed [Report This]
Date: November 20 2017 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 3

Love your story very much. 

  You grow her too fast too much in just one chapter. You can grow her just 10 or 20 mile in a chapter. Then you can write more things with her. If grow too much , there would be obly a. few things to say.

  I wonder if you would add a new graphics character,and make a great size comparison sense.



Author's Response:

It's fair to have personal preference for a slower growth. In this case, I was just following the commissioner's vision.

Reviewer: officerkc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2017 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 3

Can't wait to see where this goes from here. PS please someone commish a giant Carly Anton lol



Author's Response:

I'm sure there are more than a few readers thinking similarly

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