Date: November 05 2017 12:17 AM Title: A New Friend
Dude loving the story so far!! Your descriptions and train of thought are done really well, and I rather enjoy the budding friendship with Kara and Penelope, crossing my fingers it becomes something more! If not, oh well. I rather enjoy a solid story with giantess content than a porn read with generic writing, so you’re doing awesome :) can’t wait to read more!
Date: November 03 2017 11:52 PM Title: A New Friend
The captain didn't really feel like an "evil" character so much a mysoginist but he didn't try to just kill the people he didn't like outright, he had a somewhat noble goal he wanted to accomplish and the world was against him. It kinda felt like he was just designated the villian by the story to give a "final boss" to it so that it could end with his death. I also felt like the most interesting part of the story, the bonding between Penny and Kara was glossed over with a timeskip. All of a sudden they reappear in the story and they're best pals...Anyway overall it was a good read, those^ were just my nitpicks.
This story is based off an idea for a much longer story I had months ago. Originally it was almost exclusively Penny and Kara. But I don't do long stories anymore, hence the timeskip. Smith was supposed to be a pretty dickish character, and I don't really see how killing native inhabitants and colonizing a land is noble. But if that's how he came off then it's my fault as a author for not making it clearer.