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Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2017 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 10

A very interesting super detailed chapter of just the daily business/life in this town. Super detailed on street and in the doctor's place. Good writing style. We get to see more and more about this place and love the behavior between the people. Poor Glendoria being surrounded with not the brightest of minds.

Good pacing of the whole story.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2017 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 10

Poor derrick, the ride in her purse is always tough. You are at the mercy of her sway and the purse hitting her hips. It's a tough mode of transportation.
Greatly enjoyed Glendoria putting that lady in her place after she crushed those little thieves. I am sure their crushing happens all too frequently.
Loved how the veterinarian Dr. Crausey just declothes little derrick with even asking him. He is after all just a pet. The antibacterial dunking is quite logical. Who knows where these filthy pets have been.
Love how Dr. Crausey just rolls him around in her hand to check derrick out. Then she sticks a q-tip up his ass. After that she tells him to lie still. He obeys, well I guess so. Can you imagine disobeying Dr. Crausey?
Then she pins him to the table with her fingers and gives him a shot. Imagine that pain. Wow.
Having Dr. Crausey rubhis but with one finger must have been nice. Love how she talks to little derrick like he was a child. So demeaning.
When Mara or Glendoria bring Yegori in he will be in for a few surprises I guess. This was probably my favorite chapter. The lack of caring what the little people think was evident in a lot of ways. Either they get stepped on or they get a needle in the butt.It's painful.
Greatly enjoyed it,
Diesel

Author's Response:

No I can not imagine disobeying her when she's around 130 feet tall. He, he he.

You will be seeing more of her as the story unfolds rest assured.

I'm very happy that you liked this chapter.    And thanks a lot for the review Diesel. :)

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