Date: November 13 2017 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loved Rhoda playing with her dolly while the adults talked. Cool how the ladies talked casually as the humans got their heads bashed in. They are smart women. Humans equal to Titans, preposterous.
Loved that when Mir spoke to yegori her voice thundered through his tiny world. Her logical threats about her being forced to be violent. Mir's idea to smoke him out was a good one. His new living quarters look great. Very nice accommodation for a little man. Loved Mir dangling him by his ankle in the picture. It shows her power and his worth to her. Your pictures are invaluable.
Question, when he's in his container will Mir's or Mara's voice still be god like to him in volume?
Greatly enjoyed this chapter. I am hooked and looking forward to more.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
The voices will return for Yegori when he wakes up which will be a few more chapters down the road as I'm still trying to set this story up properly. I've got a big act to follow as I'm sure that you are aware of.
I'm glad that you notices all of those points and particulars. It makes me certain that people are paying attention and not to get sloppy. :)
[Report This]Date: November 12 2017 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 8
We get to meet Ilsa for the first time and her darling daughther with her per Dorgi. ;) Mir with her joint is a nice thouch. :) The render of Mir and her joint is very nice. Love terrarium with al its functions. Their interactions are told in good detail.
Interesting set up and development of those many different characters and factions. All ingredients are there to feel some massive confrontations coming up. :)
Luckely for Earth humans, Titans aren't smart. The fact that Earthlings already have space craft, were as they think they still live in the stone age, should cause some alarm. But they have become complacent.
Please continue the story. Want to see were this all lead up too for Yegori and the this whole moon. :)
Author's Response:
I'm trying to continue it indeed. It is a daunting affair when what has been already written in the scores of chapters before I decided to give this a try is uniquely challenging I'm finding. I'll do my best though Barrow.