Date: November 11 2017 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 7
Is the doctor visit the next chapter?
Author's Response:
No, but it will come so hang in there Diesel.. I'm still setting this story up believe it or not.. But Yegori will have to pay his dues with the Doctor rest assure my friend, He, he,he.
Date: November 11 2017 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 7
An interesting relationship between sheega and Lauria. Was not expecting that.
Author's Response:
Ha, ha! Glad that I surprised you then. :)
Hopefully pleasantly. ;)
[Report This]Date: November 10 2017 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 7
A very interesting conversation between Sheega and Lauria. For Sheega, her life has more advantages without all those equality laws Lauria proposes or without the chosen path full of peril towards these goals. For most humans there it would be a blessing compared to what they have now.
While this is all being discussed they have a beautiful scene together where size change/difference is being used. Master and pet, Lovers, friends, etc. Whatever they want to lable it, they have a good time. :)
Love render of 2 womens bodies and the most prominant feature, the rubber duck. ;)
Also good to see the area where Sol Posidein lies within the Empire and how close to earth.
Good writing and pacing. Can't wait for chapter 8.
Author's Response:
It will be posted soon.. I'm just spacing them out at regular intervals now.
You've just reminded me that I've introduced Holotech to the colony so I have to bear that in mind for some of the future chatpers that I have planned.
Thanks a lot for the detailed comment Barrow, as I might have overlooked that and made a mistake otherwise.