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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2017 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 6

She's a walloped beeorn. He got what he deserved as the Giantess girl Titan engulfed him in her hand. She will have fun with him. It reminded me of that TZ episode.
Lauria is a cool Titan.

Author's Response:

Oh yeah it kinda does remind you of that episode somewhat..  Cool that you  point that out Diesel.  Ha!

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2017 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 6

Sounds like animal farm. :) There are a lot of interesting clues in it and that is why I'm re reading it to see if I missed something.

It is those kinds of things that give it a feel of realism. Those small details and touches to the story. You are very good in the logistics of how this world and universe works. I want to know more and see where this adventure goes.

 

 

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2017 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 6

Love it Orcs and the trainscene is very interesting. Both funny, scary, satisfying and uncomfortable at the same time. I can just imagine how scary this would look from out human perspective. Seeing this sort of scene in Cinema would be a treat. :)

Go Sheega!

Pacing and details thrown in always top notch. Interesting developments.

Keep on going. DrCreep. I really miss the good GTS stories on this site and could use some.



Author's Response:

Thanks again Barrowman.  I chose orcs because they traditionally were depicted to have pig like faces and that will make sense to other readers who know what pigs are associated with as I attempt to show the horrors of fascism and the misery that it can bring to the human spirit.

 

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