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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2017 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 5

We get a picture and a story of Matilda stomping little mort. He was weak anyway. I loved Mara ripping his steel door with her pinky finger. We are sooo small and weak compared to the titans. I can hardly wait till Glendoria gets him out. He will be terrified.
Great chapter,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Yeah, it would be quite intimidating to watch somebody tear a pressurized steel away like it were tin foil..  Intimidating indeed.

 

Thank you Diesel. :)

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2017 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 5

There was not much left of Mort. Cool pov render.

An interesting window in whats to come and can't therefor wait for chapter 6. Interesting setting and can't wait for many more big confrontations. 
Lets see what Yegori's role is in all that is to come.

 



Author's Response:

Yegori will be a while in the making.. It's got to seem plausible so therefore the extended set up of many other characters who might play a role later on.

Thanks for hanging in there Barrow man. :)

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