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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2017 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 4

Cool stuff. Mara is smart but sometimes the odds are against her. I think she will enjoy staying with Glendoria. Now if they can get him out of the ship.

Author's Response:

She's going to get into some trouble yes, he he he.

Thanks again Diesel!!!!

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2017 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 4

Very good detail. I love your build up and always believable interaction. Your Titans act more believable and are way more interesting than most in other Titan novels.
In Contact, most of them give to me a very unrealistic response upon seeing a human spaceship. Glendoria and the others react much more realistic with this encounter.

I can say it a lot of times, but it has to be said. Good pacing. It reads well and interesting.

 



Author's Response:

OH!..  I'm glad that you feel that I'm keeping it real Barrowman. :)

I'm also glad that you took the time to write your ideas to me when so many others seem tongue tied alas, he he he.

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