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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10 2017 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

I am rereading this story. I enjoyed it the first time but I am enjoying it more the second time. Loved Mara's enjoyment at seeing the tiny earth man for the first time. Yegori thought the spacetrip was a ride, he's really in for a ride now.
Later,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Wow!  Glad that more things sank in on the second read Diesel. :)

Thank you very much for the comments!

Reviewer: Naoru Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04 2017 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

I think you are a bit misguided here. When someone says that a character has two years in titan years, that character is a human. Is like saying that in human years, my dog is 3 years old, but in dog years thats 21 years. A titan that has two titan years is a two year old toddler, not an adult. Everytime the scale has been used on the stories is like that, and this comes from someone who has readen almost all of them.



Author's Response:

I see what your saying.. I'll make an adjustment back to Earth years to eliminate confusion.

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2017 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow. A Titan Federation story. This could be very interesting indeed for we now so little about it, but enough to want to know more about it.

Love the start too were we get a detailed look about 50ties 60ties Russia or Soviet Union life. Yegori's trip seems like an escape from those KGB types an his new exciting adventure begins.

I love how Mara captures the space ship. She's cradling like a mother would a child. Very beautiful imagery here.

Very good eye for deatil and history.
The lay out of that moon/planet his an interesting design too. Cool places like Venice, Rome, Paris, Rotterdam, etc are on the map.

Hope you continue this. There is just to much fetish posted here without a story in it that ruin the quality GW once had.
This story is a very pleasant surprise.



Author's Response:

I will definately continue this.  I'm bringing it over from Deviant Art so that I can become more sexually explicit with it among other things.

 

Thanks again Barrowman. :)

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