Date: November 01 2017 8:43 PM Title: Personal Shrinker
I liked this story! It's pretty nice that the tiny gets a pretty happy ending for a change
Every now and then a tiny doesn't get crushed or eaten. We call those lucky few "saved for later."
Date: November 01 2017 3:58 PM Title: Personal Shrinker
The gym description in the beginning was very accurate to relate to my own experience. It's amazing how people look completely different, and maybe even better while wearing gym clothes.
Even the workouts felt real, I remember starting with 10 weight barbells instead of 15. At least I did more than 1 set compared to him, haha.
The story felt better before the shrinking in my opinion. I loved how the guy was thinking about his own embarrassing condition rather than trying to figure out why he was getting smaller.
When he was shrinking, Lynsey didn't even care for him and it went from sexy to scary. If she addressed his height and teased him, it would have been more erotic. Instead, I got this spooky Halloween vibe when he was shrinking and no one thought it was weird. I couldn't tell if it was planned or they were all faking their reactions.
If he did shrink to nothing, this could easily translate to some gym horror story.
Interesting story. I will give you that.
Haha, to be honest I wasn't even thinking about the date when I posted this. It's just an idea I've had for a while and finally figured out an execution I was satisfied with. For a bit I was going to have him shrink to nothing, but I really like writing from a micro-scale POV. Glad you thought it was interesting!