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Reviewer: Morithomomo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 19 2022 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hi, I really liked your story, especially the part where William is hurt because of his sister's teeth. I really liked everything but I would have liked a part with his sister's feet and also I would have liked the end of the story to be a bit more... Brutal for William, for example he would have been chewed up by his sister or he would have been crushed by her foot. Keep it up 👌



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.
I'm not that big on feet or hard gore so I don't include much of either in my stories.  It's not like the gts community is hurting for foot content though lol

Reviewer: Niggle Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29 2017 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow really nice story, glad to see your writing again.


Does this mean your other story (Konosuba) will get updated at some point as well?



Author's Response:

Thanks, good to be writing again.

It will, but it will take some time.... I kinda lost the notes I had outlining the last round, but I do remember how it ended, so I have to recreate it...

Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2017 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

Finsihed, It was amazing!  Love how the sister cahnged over the course of the story.  You should definetly continue it.  Would be cool to have a chapter with the friend, or maybe the sister decides to have another contest?



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it!  I think I will do a follow up chapter sometime... though it might not be until next Halloween.

Kinda want to keep the aesthetic if you know what I mean :)

Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2017 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'll finish it, it's just when I do I'll be sad since it will be over.  It's really good I don't want it to end lol

Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2017 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

I've only read half so far, but this is gold!  I really don't want to finsih it, it is amazing!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

I really hope you do finish though, you'll hopefully like it too lol

Reviewer: BigJames Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2017 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

Really enjoyed the story, Mom is strangely very chill but maybe its a witch thing. Would love to see the follow up and learn how little brother is doing in his new role, would like to see some mom time.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Yes, Morgan is very chill and it is deeply rooted in the Witch culture to respect the power of other Witches, but Cassandra is more or less a God to her (Even if only for one day).  A Witches priorities are to her sisters and daughters first and formost, and she has no right to tell Cassandra what to do with her powers as long as she doesn't expose the others.

This story is getting plenty of positive feedback, so while I wasn't planning on doing anything else with it when I published it, I am seriously considering it now.

Reviewer: MadHatter Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 01 2017 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Definitely a strange family dynamic overall. mom who hasn't a care in the world that her daughter is basically god for a day or what happens to her son much. Lots of fetish scenarios and fun for most audiences! I like!

Yay for halloween stories!



Author's Response:

Morgan was in a very unique position in the story.  She's obligated to go meet up with her 'sisters' to perform their yearly rituals, even though she really wanted to be by Cassandra's side.  She would treat Cassandra like a Goddess if said Goddess didn't tell her not to, so she respects the wishes of her Goddess and will continue to be Cassandra's mother (even though she still does think of Cassandra as a Goddess).  As for the fate of her son, well her God said she wanted to use her son as a plaything, there was nothing further to discuss.  That and the fact that in their family men do not aquire magical powers ever so...  William is... Well, she loved him as her son, but she doesn't have the power to change him back, so he might as well make for a pleasant toy?

Thank you very much!  I'm happy to please my audience!

Halloween is awesome!!

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