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Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24 2017 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

Then I stand corrected.  Again, really nice story!

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Date: October 23 2017 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is hot! We need more teacher stories!

A shame that it's already over. I wanted to know how long he was in her panties and what special plans she had for him.

I loved the confidence she had and how she handled Eric.

I would love to see more of this type of content.

Author's Response:

I imagine she kept him in her panties for a rather lengthy detention. Several detentions. ;)

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2017 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nice!  Great little short story (he he he).  If I could make two observations, would Miss Alison really call a student "honey" ("Just a sip, honey") in front of the entire class, or would "Mister Eric" ("Just a sip Mister Eric") once again be more appropriate to her stern personality?

The second, when you wrote "Eric's helpless, invincible body beneath her foot" I am assuming you meant "indestructable" rather than "invincible".

Can't wait to read more of your work.  Thank you for posting it.

Author's Response:

I had Miss Alison describe Eric as 'honey' to illustrate her playfulness and femininity. She was supposed to be a disciplinarian who took pleasure in being so, henceforth she uses the more casual 'honey' as well as the more professional 'mister'. I didn't want to make the story too long, so I did not have much room for development. 

As for indestructible compared to invincible, I agree, but the challenge specifically said that 'invincibility is a must' so I decided to incorporate the word to satisfy the requirement.

Thanks for the review, means a lot!

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2017 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

This may be a short story written in a short time, but I still love that he's going to be in detention for not paying attention!

Reviewer: Stephen1000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2017 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful. I am so happy that u responded, and it was done well. I’d be happy for u or others to respond to more of my challenges

Author's Response:

I'm really happy you liked it!

Reviewer: romaescipion Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2017 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

hola, encantado de conocerte, leyó este relato y me ha parecido fabuloso y fantástico,

me da mucha pena que no lo vayas a continuar,pues el personaje de la Srta Allison con Eric en Sus bragas mereceria un capitulo mas extenso.Enhorabuen y Un abrazo muy grande,me ha gustado mucho

Author's Response: Lo siento, no hablo mucho español. Un poco. Muchas gracias por las palabras amables. Yo estoy muy feliz te gusta el capituló. Pero, este es la primera capituló, lo siento. Yo tengo otras cuentos. Gracias.

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