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Reviewer: steveg17 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 11 2018 10:02 PM Title: The New Girl

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Reviewer: steveg17 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 11 2018 9:38 AM Title: The New Girl

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Reviewer: chasekampfer Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2018 1:58 PM Title: The New Girl

are you still updating this story

Reviewer: Medrinisoc Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28 2018 10:36 PM Title: The New Girl

Hey, I just wanted to say that I really liked this story. You should do something you enjoy, if you aren't feeling it, don't feel obliged to continue. I personally loved the unaware parts of the story, especially the tremendous details. I look forward to reading whatever you write in the future, and I would love to read a chronicle of Fraser. Good luck. :)

Reviewer: giantess jessica Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 01 2017 9:34 AM Title: The New Girl

how long did it take you to make the story.

Reviewer: giantess jessica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 29 2017 1:16 PM Title: The New Girl

this story is amazing. Sent 3:16

Reviewer: giantess jessica Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 29 2017 10:57 AM Title: The New Girl

is my story giantess revenge really that bad.

Reviewer: Wantstobedominated Signed [Report This]
Date: November 29 2017 10:28 AM Title: The New Girl

I love the way you're going with this story! It's probably my favorite one on the site! Don't listen to any of the reviews that don't like it; they're wrong.



Author's Response: Wow! I can't believe what you just said. Literally speechless right now......

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 26 2017 10:51 AM Title: The New Girl

More like the third time. But, who's counting? ;-D

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 26 2017 9:27 AM Title: The New Girl

only two words
  Please more



Author's Response: Another two words Will do!

Reviewer: giantess jessica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2017 6:35 AM Title: The New Girl

hello. Your story is great and im not the only that thinks that! Great job.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Stephen1000 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 14 2017 7:47 PM Title: The New Girl

Love the story. I would prefer back. Maybe he just is like squished flat on one of her cheeks to the point where he is just a second layer of skin. Maybe, but in the end it is up to u

Reviewer: ap13rocks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2017 5:35 PM Title: The New Girl

Completey understood.  I saw your previous reponse and completely respect it.  In that case, would it be possible to have her wear flip flops,  where the main character ends up hiding under one of her nail polished toenails.  Just and idea.

Reviewer: Medrinisoc Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12 2017 5:06 PM Title: The New Girl

I'm loving the unaware aspect; I really hope it continues that way for a bit. Your attention to detail is superb, and I love the story so far. For your first story, this is remarkable. I'm hoping that Joe ends up in the back of her panties, and that things don't go very smoothly. Looking forward to seeing where you go with this. :) Good luck.



Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Not technically my first story as I've deleted a few I didn't like after a few chapters, but still......!!

Reviewer: shrinkchicken Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06 2017 5:37 PM Title: The New Girl

Now the action's begun! A fun chapter, and I'm looking forward to more.


As what what I'm voiting for, I hope he hides in a shoe or a sock or something of the sort. And of course that it remains unaware, as that is my favorite genre.

 

Keep up the good work my man.



Author's Response: Thanks so much! Wasn't expecting to enjoy writing that chapter as much as I did! Maybe it'll make a comeback later on.....

Reviewer: Lil Speck Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2017 4:51 PM Title: The New Girl

I forgot to give it a rating last time! >.<


That was a great chapter. I look forward to seeing where the story goes.

As for where he jumps? Hrm.. Trying to think logically, what would be around and why he would go there.

If he's on the floor, coughed out, she might trash him. Then he's never gonna get saved. The bag was a bad idea last time. You know she would put her shoes back on.. Hrm.

I think if it were me, I'd prolly wanna stick close to her without putting myself in immediate danger. Maybe climb to the top of a sock and tuck myself in and hold on. Ride it out til she gets home, maybe, and then climb a desk or something, write a note. Or try to wait til she's asleep, pull at an eyelash, etc etc.

Rambling here. Anyways, plenty of opportunities for things to go awry. I mean, just because you have a plan, doesn't mean you'll pull it off. Besides, some people tend to fidget when they study. >.>

Hope to see more ideas and reviews from other commenters. Keep on doing you.



Author's Response: I do like to think logically, but this isn't my decision so be as creative in these situations as you want. A teenage girl's bedroom floor could have ANYTHING and EVERYTHING on it. The sock/foot idea does seem to be popular at the moment so we'll see.......

Reviewer: Lil Speck Signed [Report This]
Date: November 03 2017 6:41 PM Title: The New Girl

Loving it so far.

I really like the unaware stuff too.

As for things I'd like to see? I really like the close calls. The parts where "Oh my god, she noticed me, hey!" only she didn't at all and things get worse. I like a smidgeon of hope, then a bombardment of not-quite-hopelessness. Close calls and the like.

Also, however you could work it in, a huuuge fan of soft vore. No crunch, no gore, no ending a good story prematurely, but just enough mix of pleasure, pain and fear to be exciting.



Author's Response: No need to worry about the story being completed any time soon, much more to come!

Reviewer: daftpunk Signed [Report This]
Date: November 03 2017 2:35 AM Title: The New Girl

i'd like to see the hero help out anna with her homework... by being her stress toy. the chapter would involve joe in her bag being grabbed in her tight fist and squeezed, used in every way by her hand while she studies. she might also by one of those girls that rubs stuff, sucks on and gently chews things with her mouth when she is focusing.

what kind of unaware situations or locations are your favourite because i'm full of suggestions.



Author's Response: Personality, I'll take anything related to either mouth, feet, ass, and breasts. Nothing too dirty.... Yet

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 21 2017 11:29 PM Title: The New Girl

Intriguing start! I'm guessing that Lia and Galina are brunettes?

Author's Response: Lucky Guess! Yeah I left some details like that out just because I didn't want it to be too detailed and feel like some sort of characteristics file. They will be added into the next few chapters for those who like a detailed character profile.

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