Date: March 13 2018 5:33 PM Title: Meeting the Ballerina
Miss this. Was hooked on the way Marilyn kept shifting between being half-caring towards Annie, to becoming dismissve and having a hard time keeping her respect for her, while Annie clung to any signs that Marilyn would end up keeping her. Hope one day you fall back into rhythm for this one. As I know how hard it is to get back to a story after months of being away from it :)
Yeah I will try toc ome back to it but maybe I will do some changes. I wanted the story to go in a direction and got too nfluenced by reviews and comments and then I changed my mind and went in a direction that elad to writer's block.
If I come back to it I'll have changes made to the last chapter before going one forward.
Date: January 13 2018 5:14 PM Title: The great escape
Just a little thing...
If the story is over (and I hope it't not!), please make it official, because it still says "complete: no".
Otherwise I can't wait!
It's not over, I just didn't have time to write more, and started a new story.
Date: November 10 2017 7:21 AM Title: The great escape
I honestly thought they'd be more careful about permanent damage, but I'll admit my reasons were fairly weak (not doing it to her BEFORE she escaped).
A bit hard to swallow, but it makes sense - and most importantly, you're back! I was starting to worry...
Date: November 10 2017 1:57 AM Title: Meeting the Ballerina
Oh wow. Sure wish I could be like a rejuvinating insole for Annie so that maybe her legs will heal enough to walk if I spent enough time in her shoes. :) Great story so far and can't wait to see where it goes.
Date: November 06 2017 3:48 PM Title: At work - Part 2
Oh, and the obvious: she tries something not foot related, either she doesn't like it or she decides that she's fond of how Annie loves being under her feet or she keeps it as punishment.
(not so obvious in your stories, but that's fine :)
Date: November 06 2017 3:31 PM Title: At work - Part 2
Hopefully you don't mean "ideas" as in "how do we get from here to December?", because I have no idea!(*)
For some reason when I read she's a jurist I got attached to the idea she uses it somehow, as in their relation ends up defined by a contract or something - paying the rent to live in her shoe, hired to be her foot carer, married and indulging her kink for domination - anything of the sort.
About Annie's family, it all depends on their intentions and their attitude, which you still didn't show.
But if you meant "random fetish idea for some next chapter", ehm... I honestly don't know, too many options, but I'll try a few:
1. they go out somewhere, normal size, then Marylin feels like having her shrunken (eg she was explaining things to someone incredulous); Annie can object, but you get more points if Marylin gets to show that Annie loves it, just like she does.
2. They are somewhere, Annie inshoe; Marylin needs her for whatever, takes her out (or just takes her foot out), gets what she needs, then back in the shoe.
3. some footwear related thing, either something as unusual as her dancing shoes, or maybe shopping - she helps choosing from the inside, and if Marylin accepts her suggestion Annie has to pay.
About mom/sis scenarios: yep, I don't like it, and I appreciate you remember it, but this is YOUR story, write what you like! I'm grown up, I can skip sections I dislike if it's too much...
(*) Marylin files&wins a lawsuit against Annie's mom - technically an answer, super difficult to write :D
Date: November 02 2017 3:48 PM Title: At work - Part 2
DON'T YOU DARE! I will *not* write reviews until you pinky-swear you'll go on with the story... :D
That's hardly a review ;) But I get your point. So...I know you don't like mom/sister scenarios, any other ideas?
Date: October 30 2017 7:53 PM Title: At work - Part 1
I seriously go back and check everyday if you posted a new chapter!!! I LOVE this story. I am excited to see how Annie fares in Marilyn's shoes ALL day long. I love that Marilyn is starting to be more and more degrading towards her.
Date: October 28 2017 3:33 PM Title: At work - Part 1
I just noticed that the "Still alive" that opens the story was NOT while dancing, it was at work in December, ie three months after the story begins; somehow I missed the dates and ended up misunderstanding a few things.
Oh well, good to know it (probably) ends in the best way :D
You got it.
The story is a leap in the past from that moment in December. ;P