Date: November 10 2017 7:21 AM Title: The great escape
I honestly thought they'd be more careful about permanent damage, but I'll admit my reasons were fairly weak (not doing it to her BEFORE she escaped).
A bit hard to swallow, but it makes sense - and most importantly, you're back! I was starting to worry...
Date: November 10 2017 1:57 AM Title: Meeting the Ballerina
Oh wow. Sure wish I could be like a rejuvinating insole for Annie so that maybe her legs will heal enough to walk if I spent enough time in her shoes. :) Great story so far and can't wait to see where it goes.
Date: November 06 2017 3:48 PM Title: At work - Part 2
Oh, and the obvious: she tries something not foot related, either she doesn't like it or she decides that she's fond of how Annie loves being under her feet or she keeps it as punishment.
(not so obvious in your stories, but that's fine :)
Date: November 06 2017 3:31 PM Title: At work - Part 2
Hopefully you don't mean "ideas" as in "how do we get from here to December?", because I have no idea!(*)
For some reason when I read she's a jurist I got attached to the idea she uses it somehow, as in their relation ends up defined by a contract or something - paying the rent to live in her shoe, hired to be her foot carer, married and indulging her kink for domination - anything of the sort.
About Annie's family, it all depends on their intentions and their attitude, which you still didn't show.
But if you meant "random fetish idea for some next chapter", ehm... I honestly don't know, too many options, but I'll try a few:
1. they go out somewhere, normal size, then Marylin feels like having her shrunken (eg she was explaining things to someone incredulous); Annie can object, but you get more points if Marylin gets to show that Annie loves it, just like she does.
2. They are somewhere, Annie inshoe; Marylin needs her for whatever, takes her out (or just takes her foot out), gets what she needs, then back in the shoe.
3. some footwear related thing, either something as unusual as her dancing shoes, or maybe shopping - she helps choosing from the inside, and if Marylin accepts her suggestion Annie has to pay.
About mom/sis scenarios: yep, I don't like it, and I appreciate you remember it, but this is YOUR story, write what you like! I'm grown up, I can skip sections I dislike if it's too much...
(*) Marylin files&wins a lawsuit against Annie's mom - technically an answer, super difficult to write :D
Date: November 02 2017 3:48 PM Title: At work - Part 2
DON'T YOU DARE! I will *not* write reviews until you pinky-swear you'll go on with the story... :D
That's hardly a review ;) But I get your point. So...I know you don't like mom/sister scenarios, any other ideas?
Date: October 30 2017 7:53 PM Title: At work - Part 1
I seriously go back and check everyday if you posted a new chapter!!! I LOVE this story. I am excited to see how Annie fares in Marilyn's shoes ALL day long. I love that Marilyn is starting to be more and more degrading towards her.
Date: October 28 2017 3:33 PM Title: At work - Part 1
I just noticed that the "Still alive" that opens the story was NOT while dancing, it was at work in December, ie three months after the story begins; somehow I missed the dates and ended up misunderstanding a few things.
Oh well, good to know it (probably) ends in the best way :D
You got it.
The story is a leap in the past from that moment in December. ;P
Date: October 25 2017 9:33 AM Title: Living large
Two minor notes to make the wait more bearable
- dirt doesn't regrow in this world - "doesn't unshrink" in the words of Exiguus.
- because of the story twist, here's my (now obsolete) prediction - Annie ends up paying the rent to live in Marylin's shoe. Btw, do you have the plot laid out? Just to know if playing "guess what happens next" is ok, you know :)
Btw, something you have in common with Exiguus: re-readability.
Partially because he makes so many edits and rewrites with every new chapter (which makes him so slow), I always end up rereading the whole story whenever he posts anything; well, I found that you & Exiguus make some of the stories that I enjoy rereading (often) the most. Not sure why or if others agree, but for me that's how it is.
Thank you for the extended review, I really appreciate it. You're right that dirt shoudn't unshrink, I just kind had the feeling Annie would feel dirty, maybe I'll go back and change it. As for the plot, it is laid out in my head. Sometimes I write the whole story and publish chapters one at a time, sometimes I just write a chapter and publish it when it's ready, which is this case. Playing what happens next is just fine :P
Thanks for your comments. I re-read one of my own story recently, "Lisa and Mary" And there were things in there that I had forgotten I wrote, it was funny to read it again.