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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2018 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 20: MAJOR/minor

1c thoughts:

 

I kind of like the group ending, as shitty as some of them acted it was still nice to see everyone for the most part ended up somewhat friendly.

The dream sequence was tremendous, Izzy bested a tier 3 and the dastardly Mei.

Also you need to write more if you ever hope to catch up to folks like Jacksmith etc, RL Stine wrote like 900 books.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing every chapter! 

Still plenty of drama to come I'm sure but ultimately I think they all learned something. Izzellah at least knows she has nothing to prove and maybe the biggies will give her some space?....Not likely.

Izzy deserved a victory but I think it cost her more than she'd wanted to give. These girls know very personal things about her now. How will they use that I'm looking at you Mei!!!

900 books! ö_ö . I don't know if I have that many ideas!

Thanks for all the great reviews!

 

 

Reviewer: Kurogane335 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2018 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 20: MAJOR/minor

NotSirk, you rascal ! How can you end this story on such a high note ! Damn, it was awesome, the penultimate chapter was so great, I couldn't help but read it at work ! And I'll read it again and again and again and again and... well, you get it.

 

I loved all the characters. yes, even Mei, in the end, who seems to have some serious chip on her shoulder, considering what she said in Izzy's "mental fortress" when it came to other makig mistakes if she isn't here... but now I want to know why Izzy hinted that she was her first in the SPecial ! Damn it !

Seeing Brenda's loveable attitude was so great, I ended rooting for her seriously... I wonder if we'll ever see a glimpse of her future, she deserves to find happiness, after how great a character she turned out to be. Not like Romeo "I fall for boobies" Watermiene, or Rebecca "I can't distract anyone if I don't use sex" Swann ! Kidding, I loved them too, and Lisa was the best best friend ever. 

Don't worry for the Special, we have time, I want to explore the whole first day of school and afterward for Alejandro, so at least a mont and a half more of story, I8 would say, and then I would like to write some unrelated stories in ly Random Stories Factory, so I'm pretty sure you'll get to write some, don't worry :p. It's more important that you get healed and well on your feet. I need my dose of story by NotSirk and your drawings !

I noticed the little description Izzellah's perfect minor material for boyfriend, strangely, it reminded me of somone, but I wonder who :p ! 

Anyway, get well and thanks for the story !



Author's Response:

Well to answer your question about Mei. Not to tease but I had a bit of an epilouge planned involving the true results of the game if you paid attention. I was purposefully a little vague but there is a clear winner. I didn't have time to do it though sadly. I like the story being open ended on that though. I trust you to make inferences. Thanks for the support and reviews.

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