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Reviewer: Cojack Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 20 2018 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 16: DARK/age

First let me just say that i absolutly love the world/character building in this. The writing is smooth and is just overall fun to read. I absolutely love all of the characters especially Izzelah. You did an absolutely amazing job describing how dark and horrible the dark ages were. This series is the size of a full fucking book with over 180 something pages worth of story. I absolutely love this series but I write this reveiw to tell you the one thing that is very off putting for me in this story. The age of death in a major and minor. The fact that a major can live to be over 60 years older than a minor is just so baffling to me. It would make sense for the bigger species to live a little bit longer like 10-15 years like how most women live longer than men. But just the fact that Ignacio will live longer than Izzelah is heartbreaking, and while some may argue it’s good storytellig and more realistic that life is depressing like that, it almsot makes the whole romance thing between majors and minor obsolete. Whats the point in having Izzelah and Sebrina in love (because I know that’s most likely where it’s going) if Sebrinas just gonna live to be 150 when Izzelah dies at 90. Anyway, tangent over. I’m not trying to tell you how to write your story, just giving my opinion. Great story though for real, you have real talent.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the praise. While I completely respect your opinion on the age gap, I have to say I think it makes the whole love angle more potent. It's heartbreaking and tragic yes, but I think it really speaks to the characters that they're willing to go for it anyway. Not to mention it's just another element that shows the absolute superiority of MAJORS in this world and exactly what Izzellah's against. Not even time is on her side. I think that's also why minors are more prone to ingenuity in design, or at least they were. They strive to leave a mark on the world. Will it work out for Izzellah? Should she even bother? Thank you again! 

Reviewer: Kurogane335 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 13 2018 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 16: DARK/age

I know that Iggy is against it but... I would really like Izzy and Mei screwing around, if only because I hope that we would get a glimpse of a less guarded Mei. That MAJOR probably need to let loose a lot from time to time, with how cold and composed she is all the time. Is it wrong that I want her screaming under Izzellah's caresses ?

Ps: I've noticed some strange mistakes in the form of the text, possibly because of an error on the site or something, you should perhaps change them NotSirk.

 



Author's Response:

Mei x Izzy is strangely popular, or maybe it's more like a few people commenting the same thing repeatedly. I do find it strange since I write Mei to be more robotic and blatantly manipulative. Spouting MAJOR propoganda, showing up at convenient times, basically threatening to beat the shit out of Sabrina! (That is what she originally planned btw. Mei's 10ft tall, Sabrina's 7ft and hasn't hit puberty. She was gonna destroy her! Y'know how Alaric punched Sab through a tree cause he's like 18 and buff and an adult? Yeah that would've been the second time if Meia and Sabrina had fought!) So I'm very interested that people like that pairing.

What mistakes? Besides my horrible American spelling and grammar? 

 

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