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Reviewer: Kurogane335 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 04 2017 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 6: minor/Encounters

Damn it...I had promised myself not to, because I've other projects on wikia, more personal and all still waiting in the cold outside but... I REALLY want to write a story in your MAJOR/minor universe now. Damn it ! It would be a rather brutal and short story so I'm not sure you would agree with it (no sex, Rated R and quite honestly I would have to check and be sure it respects this site policies -I think so, but better sage than sorry), so let me know if you want more details here or elsewhere, even if don't how to PM here (if it's even possible!).

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Uhhhhhhhhhh....GO FOR IT! I don't care how brutal it is. Kill someone if you want! Not any of my characters if you want it to be canon. I might even reference it if I like it. I don't know about the terms of this site but people do alot. By the nature of giantess there are many stories where people die..cruelly even. Flattened, eaten, so don't let that stop you. And from the other end many stories are straight up porn with any kink you can imagine, loli, futa, s&m, bdsm, bbm, bbc, abc, cbs...Some of those might be televison channels. Anyway most people just put a warning for courtesy. Although don't let it sidetrack you from other stuff. I've felt the pain of unfinished stories *cough* MrSirk! *cough*

Anyways besides all that! I was gonna say something along the lines of a blatant tease about wanting to post a chapter about the dark age because it's buzzing in my head right now but I won't because it won't fit with the pacing right now sooooo... take that?

Reviewer: Kosmita Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2017 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 6: minor/Encounters

I love this story mainly because of the characters. Izzy is my fav...oh shoot, can I say that? Izzy?

Anyway, I'm glad to see a new chapter added. For a second I thought this story might be abandoned. Keep up the great work. I can't wait to see more!



Author's Response:

Pff I was barely gone a month! Lots of stories and authors are gone for years! *cough* MrSirk! *cough* *cough* Anyway I'm back. I'll do at least one more chapter before Christmas. I like the flow of this story having a series of updates before a small break. 

And yeah you can call her Izzy in the comments, bue be warned! If ever I need a name idea and suddenly a character named Kosmita appears? If they say "Izzy" to her face?! Oh they're getting a slap!

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2017 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 6: minor/Encounters

     That was a joke, not a burn...I can’t burn on stuff I ain’t read.  Spooky’s implications aside. 
     Fine...I’ll read Small...the first chapter...that’s all I’ll promise....
     There. I’m being open minded...kinda.

     Okay, so, let me get this straight, all that business with the jock douchbags butting heads was a set up for Lisa achieving some sort of enlightenment?  Her greatest ambition is to go to the movies by herself.  That’s quite a leap. 
     Of course, with her recent breakup and seeing Izzy taking her time and being particular ...garnishing tons of attention while she does ... might be enough to wake her up to her circumstances .... her “too loose and it will not play, too tight and it will break” moment might emerge from that. 
     Which, now that I imagine it, sounds pretty cool.

    Hey, Izzy has no standards by which to measure friendship.  I’m happy for her every time she overcomes her desperate loneliness enough to give the stupid biggies the cold shoulder.  But she really has no benchmark for judging how a friend should act.  So, yes, scabby Sabby, maggoty Mabel and Brenda bleh are her best friends...which is just sad. And the whole mind reading thing means they don’t have to work at it...they can just say what she wants to hear.  Really, really sad.  Manipulative Mei and jungle gym Jessica have to gang up on her and really tick me off with their tricks...poor Izzy.  She doesn’t have a bad attitude...she has a legitimate complaint. 

     And if they were doing the right thing, they wouldn’t feel the need to keep their conspiracy from the poor tinies.  They’re scum and they just can’t admit it to themselves..in fact, Izzy is proving herself way smarter than them, because she figured it out first.  Ha ha..way to go tiny heroine.

   Oh, darn..that’s another long review that was really meant to just answer your answer...god...I am so weird. 

Peace

pix



Author's Response:

First  of all I love the nicknames. "Scabby" Sabby, "Maggoty" Mabel. I gotta use one ot those!

I wasn't necessarily talking about Lisa but there's potential there. 

I feel I should clarify that they're all not necessarily reading her mind verbatum. That was something Rebecca did because she's well. Skeevy, sneaky, duplicitous...other words come to mind. But it's more like Izzy's broadcasting a frequency they can all pick up on to different degrees. Someone like Sabrina might be oblivious to it because whatever yo she don't care. But someone like "Manipulative" Mei definitly picks up on it and probably uses it to her advantage. Izzy can turn it off but she doesn't know how because well.....I don't need to give you more ammunition towards Ignacio. He tried dammit! He's a single father of a minor!...Other things that won't garner and sympathy from you!

Oh and you don't have to read Small. I don't care. Different people like different stuff. I don't read everything Jacksmith *because that's an easy example* writes. Honestly I think MAJOR/minors better than Small, if only because Small was the first story I'd written in years and I had to  shake off the rust as it were. I'm far more analytical in evalutating MAJOR/minor and trying to manage mistakes and expectations. 

Also maybe you talk to much but I can't say a damn thing cause pot and kettle you see. This was supposed to be a simple reply too. I could learn from deisel.

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2017 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 6: minor/Encounters

Gawd, I hate that!

Somtimes re-logging in and hitting back space can recover it.  But it's happened to be enough that I just generate my stuff in a writng progarm then cut and paste. 

But the fact that you tried to give a detailed response means a lot.  Thanks.

Peace

pix



Author's Response:

Eh. It's probably for the best. I was picking on Peter Silver pretty hard in that post for being fairly lame. You made a comment on Izzy not having any allies that she can relate to or share her circumstance and perspective and Peter's not one of them. He's too entrenched in the status quo. An example of why bonding is so appealing but also everything Izzellah hates about minors in general. I'll might highlight his perspective more. It's not all bad. I'll try to elaborate more if I can remember what I said. 

For one I commented on that harsh burn in your first sentence. It still hurts. 

I've planted some seeds I believe. Izzellah won't be the only minor that has a unique perspective for long. We've actually already met one. Plus she has a bunch of MAJORS fo friends! Mabel and Izzy: Best Friends! 

Uh there was other stuff. More detailed response on the whole evil plan MAJORS have to control and manipulate minors for fun and profit. It's not really a conspiracy but y'know from the outside looking in it seems pretty horrible right? Thye think they're doing the right thing. Maybe they are? Who knows? *shrugs* 

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 29 2017 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 6: minor/Encounters

Phew....you’ve been gone so long I almost had to resort to reading that other story...Small is it?  But no, you showed up just in time.

Okay, I’m tempted to discuss how the opening worked on multiple levels.  How the biggies fought with...uh...through?..by?...food.  And then actually fought without an Animal House type food fight occurring. 
But I’m not gonna do that cuz Johh Belushi would roll over in his grave if I went reaching that hard.

Izzy being honest in her judgment was truly endearing.  Mabel has given her a ton of reasons to take her down a peg and yes she chose to truthful.  I really like that.  As a primary protagonist, demonstrating character is priceless.  Though principles can be weakness, used against her at inopportune moments, she’s telling the truth.  Though, like everything else, it costs her.

Though Izzy’s reaction to them going to blows was pretty darn cool also...screw a bunch of biggies getting all psycho.  She’s got better things to worry about.

I’m not sure why you’re calling her a perv...the gym scene only shows her being sexually attracted to sexually attractive people.  Yes, her ignorance about how the biggie scum can read her like an open book...I’m starting to hate dad again here...means that she loses some of her mystique just because she has intense, but normal feelings.  But that’s just more unfairness of the world and her place in it. 

This chapter was overall rather light and fun.  The biggies are still entitled and annoying, but not as vile as they are most of the time.  Though I still don’t like any of them.  The dislike is lessening in some cases.

The expansion of Mei’s character and the introduction of Jessica only makes me wish that Izzy had a wingwoman.  She’s so alone and lonely that these morons look worth her time.  Like a normal person she craves companionship with peers, but she has no peers.  All the tinies are lames and all the biggies are jerks.  So, there’s a sadness to her quest. 

The coach laying out “the big plan” really makes me wish Izzy would reject being a pawn in the biggies game.  Though the big plan seems to contradict the principal’s protests when Izzy first showed up.  Do they want minors to come and blend in, or not?  If they do, they better do something about the doors in that place. 

The question that pops into my head, the question Izzy should be asking, is would any of these so called superior types want to be a minor?  Are they creating a world, a situation, any of them would like to be in?  If they are so damn smart, why don’t any of them consider that?  Too sure all minors are alike, or too busy playing buck buck with each other for that to penetrate their thick skulls I would suppose.

Excellent characterization in a simple setting.  Well done master wordsmith.  Thank you for sharing this and keep enjoying writing.

Oh, and happy national novel writing month...last day. 

Peace

pix



Author's Response:

AAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!! I had written this whole detailed response and replied but then my login timed out and now it's gone! So you know what? Fuck it!

MAJORS are jerks okay! Most MAJORS are jerks. They like manipulating minors. They've practically been raised to do so. I'm speaking in gerneralities of course but that's the main philosophy of society as a whole. The principal's understandably worried about MAJOR/minor intermingling because MAJORS are huge and dangerous and competitive and possesive and if you add teenage emotions and hormones you're just asking for a natual disaister, but ultimately more minors=more bonds=even more minors because sex. More minors, more money, reputation, everything everyone everywhere cares about. No one's actually gonna admit that or say it so blatantly but that's how it goes. Izzellah as a minor is caught in the middle. Of course it doesn't really matter to her. She just wants to go to school, make friends, maybe get laid and be an individual. 

#not a spoiler because I've been pretty blatant with the subtext. 

Sorry I'm just pissed now. That other post was work! 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 29 2017 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 6: minor/Encounters

Izzy's got them worked into a tizzy...no...well I tried.

 

That said I am torn between the possible Irish wrestling girl and the divine Asian speedster as to my favorite non-Sabrina bonding partner. Though so far the girls seem nicer than the gents here.

Also did Izzy stab him? If so good on her!



Author's Response:

Tizzy. (T)Izzy! I get it!

Who know how this strange romance comedy/social commentary/teen drama/whatever the hell I feel like will go? I think Izzy will end up with Coach Jonah now!

Also no she didn't stab him. She wishes. It's an in chapter call back to Darren who gripped his shoulder the same way moments before. He's possessive. Most MAJORS are actually. Girls might have more of a lid on it due partially to less testosterone. :P



Author's Response:

Tizzy. (T)Izzy! I get it!

Who know how this strange romance comedy/social commentary/teen drama/whatever the hell I feel like will go? I think Izzy will end up with Coach Jonah now!

Also no she didn't stab him. She wishes. It's an in chapter call back to Darren who gripped his shoulder the same way moments before. He's possessive. Most MAJORS are actually. Girls might have more of a lid on it due partially to less testosterone. :P

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