Date: March 15 2021 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 1: A minor/Surprise
This story was recommended to me by a friend. So far, it has the makings a a great one!
Date: June 11 2018 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 1: A minor/Surprise
Great chapter was expecting Mei to try some stunts but did not expect them to bond and Brenda to go full Tier 3 on Mei. Wondering if Izzy can protect herself by going to her safe place and have her Mom protect her in times of crisis, was a great scene. Overall liked the ending to this story hoping to see more in the future.
Thanks for the stories, hope every ends up well for you NotSirk.
Date: April 13 2018 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: A minor/Surprise
Well, I've seen this one "A sickening pain buried itself in the pit of her dljdkdjdkjkdjjstomach." and that one : "
Yes,so much help. Didn’t you knock down all his tools trying to climb the shelf
ddyesterday?”
But I think it may be formating error or something.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback. I'll be looking over all my chapters in the next week or so to make adjustments.
Date: April 06 2018 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 1: A minor/Surprise
You'll see how it goes with Alejandro and Waid... and SHannon's role in that. Waid is 8f2, so two feet and two inches taller than Alejandro and really old, but still somewhat strong. Alas poor Alejandro, had he his two arms, mayhaps ! But lo, here he rest, an unmarked grave. Or not.
More seriously, Waid uses his money and influence, picking up young girls from very destitute backgrounds and basically pay them to have sex with him and bear his bastards, so they can get their families out of the slums to better lives... as long as they keep their mouths shut and their pussy open. But you shouldn't underestimate him, even with Shannon's around.
And don't forget that he'll be with Joseph Mac Ferlan's older sister. Ominous, isn't it ?
Also, 100th comment ! Hell yeah !
Author's Response:
Comment 1.0.0.!!! I've finally hit the big leagues. Interesting fact this is my most reviewed story but not my most popular. I guess people really liked MrSirk's Tales of the New World story.
Date: April 06 2018 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 1: A minor/Surprise
Little spoiler : Waid and Alejandro will have a brawl in the future. We'll see how tough he is then ! And Shannon will be left... Well, you'll see.
Shannon, in my mind, became a billionaire because her teachers told her that she may have been big but that she would never leave a mark on the world, since she was kind of a low-grade student in high-school (something she dropped out, by the way). She just decided to prove them wrong.
Concerning a presidential run between Izzy and Shannon, Alejandro and me will vote for the Minor ! I mean, Shannon has good intentions, but forcing Minors to move to year-long warmy states so they have to show some skin 365/365 is a little too much !
I can't wait to see how you'll tackle Shannon and Izzy in your Special now. After learning so much about the past and life in a school full of biggies, Miss Ivory will totally be the mentor figure of Alejandro... If she doesn't get snatched by Sabrina, Mei or Lindsey !
Author's Response:
Waid v Alejandro? Hmmm. I mean Alejandro does work out and Waid is pretty old. Like he doesn't even seem stronger than the woman he takes to bed. (How is he pulling that off anyway? Money?) But then again you haven't really described Waid's appearance in depth. Is he spry? Alejandro's young and he does actually have a kill under his belt as horrible as that is to say. waid is still a MAJOR though. How tall is he? Al does only have one arm..how hard is is prosthetic one? Maybe he can put a bit of power behind it? It might actually be interesting. I mean until Shannon gets involved and beats Waid like a bad dog. Uhh...what was the point of this?
I don't think Izzy's law that all MAJORS have to bare toned middrift in her presence would be seen as much better. Not like she'd win anyway. Even if every minor voted for her. Still a girl can dream!
Shannon v Izzy: A conflict of ideals. Speed vs Power...and also speed, and size, and money, and even more size and power. I am excited to write though!
Date: April 05 2018 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 1: A minor/Surprise
I've finally read the updated chapter 13 and man, it was gross what happened to Izzy. Those MAJORS are the worst ! I'll probably end making use of that scene in Alejandro's school life, if inly as a mention, sooner or later ! I also really like the last chapter, with the way businesses make use of the scarcity of Minors to entice customers and all. Very underhanded !
Date: March 25 2018 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 1: A minor/Surprise
Dear notsirk, I read your new story and it really is good; but for my, the fact of Izellah and Sabrina are sisters is something religious , even so I liked and thankfull for your work.
Author's Response:
Hey who am I to judge a person's gospel? Thanks for your support Puka!
Date: March 21 2018 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 1: A minor/Surprise
Really enjoying the setting of this story. Teenagers being teenagers and my favorite the rare "tiny" actually not backing down from aynthing even intimidating others. Glad to see that minors are not totally powerless in the face of Majors hope to see Izzy grow more in that department.
Kind of irratated with some of the characters since they keep pushing their agenda on Izzy but it cant be helped since they cant really go against their programming. Mei being sneeky and smart feels like she has already connected with Izzy and is able to find her as seen in the lastest chapter. Rebecca and Brenda make an odd pair but seems to work great caring for each other. Liking Brenda as she seems like a really nice person hope she gets a chance with Izzy later on. Sabrina seems like the "little sister" seeking approval from her big sister which makes her cute hope they get to grow closer since they will probably be sisters soon. Lisa at first seemed like she might be someone holding back Izzy but glad that is was the complete opposite actually being supportive and even being great friends.
Izzy just comes out great overall trying to grown and prove herself even though almost no Major really notices or cares. Wondering if with Brendas help she can become stronger against other Majors advances.
Cant wait for more chapters to see how everything turns out. Please keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
I'm happy you're enjoying the story and its characters. Sabrina would prefer Izzy not see her as a sister. That would make thing even more weird than their parents already boning. In a way it's unfair that her mom's love life could negatively effect hers.
The runnings wide open on who will end up with Izzy. Brenda might be a bit dangerous for a first time though. Who knows at this point?
A new chapter has updated. Hope you like it.
Date: March 13 2018 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 1: A minor/Surprise
Hey, how's my favorite writer doing? Hah, not really my favorite but you are in top five I guess in this site?... Anyways, just registered to the site to drop a reviev that you seem to like so much or pretend to like so I feel obligated to do it in consequence of this bad feeling in my gut.
Last few chapters seems to slow the story a bit but I guess its inevitable since you keep introduce new characters, which I like most of them especially the grandma and the stud couple (yeh I will call them that). This new development between them, yes I'm talking about sadomazo thing, seems a bit risky since I belive most people come to this story for the gentle? stuff. Which is ok I guess, a little diversity is always good, you can't just stereotype the whole species and be done with them. This individual characters are the important part, why am I telling you this even though you already know this? because I really like that stuff, I mean the whole dominating thing and whatnot and want you to continue with this. Also not to forget that if they are doing it right they trust each other tremendously which adds to the charm of this story. Now to the part to what end this granny tanunts him in public or tries to show him off even though two out of every three person in state knows she have a young minor husband because of the TV show. I'm sure you have a good explanation for it, or not... I'm sure we can find it on our own even if one of your characters wont phrase it exactly why, I mean we are not that slow, show some faith in your readers.
About your other works you share with us beside your crappy drawings (yes I called them crappy, twice now even, I remember you telling us about tring to publish a comic, which is a great goal, and I can tell from your first doodles to the newer ones quality improved even if its just a bit, what I'm trying to say is practice makes it perfect) oh yes I was talking about your other works before I got side tracked, please dont call them bad or "dont read!" I personally ejoyed them even if they are not finished, there were some cringy parts but it was a minor thing and overal I think they are pretty good all of them, I hope you continue one of them or all? Well I guess its a bit strech.
Thanks for sharing your work, I'm looking forward to a new chapter.
Author's Response:
This comment was strangely uplifting even though I think you backhandedly complimented me like three times.
And yeah I do introduce new characters a lot. Pay it no mind. It's just a quirk of my writing I'm trying to reel in. The problem is even minor (heh "minor") characters have a name and story in my mind. For example Royce; the math girl that pissed Sabrina off. She was only in one chapter and I don't plan on using her again, but she's named now and maybe that builds an expectation to see her again. I try to make my world seem believable and Izzellah can't just be in class with only Sabrina. So Royce exists. Or if Izzellah wants to go to a library well then a librarian has to exist. Say I right a chapter about Ignacio going to work? Well then he needs coworkers and a boss. Even more new characters! That being said I think I've gotten a good primary and secondary cast of around twelve or so reaccuring characters (about six that actually matter). So I don't plan on adding anymore of real significance.
Probably won't get a steamy boundary (and ass) shattering chapter where Randalf discovers the joys of being penetrated. Summer resents you calling her a granny by the way. Even though that's exactly what she is! Anyway it doesn't really fit the theme of this story. Also I'm not confident in my ability to write good sex scenes. Maybe in MAJOR/minor: SPECIAL though. There are no rules there! Will get more clarification on Randalf in the next chapter. SHort answer is just because you're famous doesn't mean you want to be peeped at half naked.
It's also really nice to find someone who enjoyed my older work. It warms my heart. My cold...cold....heart............ I tend not to value my old work so much just because I feel like I'm better now. Not much better mind you, but enough to see all the flaws in my old stuff while not recognizing when I'm making new ones. I'll try not to insult it though. It's all part of the writing process. I'm sure I'll figure out something to do with those old stories. Snapped for example directly played into the writing of Small.
Thanks for the stellar comment.
Date: March 12 2018 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 1: A minor/Surprise
Hey I just wanted to say that I love this story.
I have a request for a drawing if u don't mind, could u draw Izzy and Sabrina?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comment and the totally doable request. Honestly I should have drawn them more a while ago and this is a good excuse to. I'd look for it but don't know if the drawing will be done before I finish the next chapter. It will happen though!
[Report This]Date: March 04 2018 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 1: A minor/Surprise
I don't have anything to whine about the content, so I just would like to thank you for the update!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the comment and not whining, but feel free to whine if you find something whine worthy!
Date: January 25 2018 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 1: A minor/Surprise
Hey NotSirk, quick question... Is this picture from your tumblr how you imagine Mei ? Because if so, I can understand why Izzy would be drooling all over her despite herself, haha !
https://sirksome.tumblr.com/post/169087906414/welovemusculargirls-isnt-she-gorgeous
Author's Response:
I didn't think of it at the time, but yeah that's probably close to what Mei looks like. That's most likely a slightly above average look and fitness level of most MAJORS.
Date: January 17 2018 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 1: A minor/Surprise
Hey NotSirk, quick question. For some times now, I've an in head the idea of a wiki for MAJOR/Minor and I wanted to now if you would give it a go, if I ever manage to bother my lazy ass to work on it, templates and all. Also, I've an idea about some stories set in the distant past (long before the Dark Age), would you greenlight them by giving me the usual size of MAJORS around 2500 BC and 1000 A.C. ?
[Report This]Date: January 17 2018 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 1: A minor/Surprise
Reading through this story because you've dropped some reviews for me and I happen to be enjoying it so far! When I finish and have some time I'll offer you a more substantial review, but this is quite good man!
Author's Response:
Hey thanks! I'm enjoying your story as well!
Date: January 06 2018 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 1: A minor/Surprise
Awesome end to this part of the story! You and Kurogane have done some great work! Also, I remember reading the New World stuff with Jack, Tyler, and especially Greg and Ramona! Would love to see it continue!
Author's Response:
Someone remember New World! My heart! Unfortunately it seems interest has died on those old stories, but hey at least you commented on it! I still might look into them though. Maybe test a re upload of a chapter? Who knows *shrug*
Date: January 01 2018 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 1: A minor/Surprise
Well, a special story with Alejandro and Lindsey in High School (probably at Winton) can only happen after at least one year has passed for Izzy so, you know what to do to read it : write MOAR content ! :p
Joke aside, i'll already try to finish Dance with Fire before writing anything else ^^
Date: December 17 2017 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 1: A minor/Surprise
Oh, he wouldn't be really upet. More like a "Oh come on!" moment since he said that he hadn't read SHannon's bio because her products were not targeting minors. Expect some kind of "She spent a whle year in a High School full of MAJORS, shes bound to have learnt some useless things" snarky moments ^^.
Date: December 12 2017 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 1: A minor/Surprise
lovely crossover
Author's Response:
Hey! Thanks! Lovely comment!
Date: December 11 2017 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 1: A minor/Surprise
I'll put it here, if only to force peoples to read your story, gnyhéhéhé...
Alejandro : 1m83 / 6f
Alaric : 3m15 / 10,3f (should reach 3m25 /10,7f)
Lindsey : 2m45 / 8f (should reach 2m80 / 9,2f)
Ofelia : 2m75 / 9f
Jules : 3m05 / 10f
Andrew : 3m / 9,8f
Derek : 3m07 / 10,1f (should reach 3m20 / 10,5f)
Alexis : 3m07 / 10,1f
Shannon : 4m45 / 14,6f (should reach up to 5m20 / 17,1f, because she has been diagnosed with gigantism !)
Date: December 11 2017 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 1: A minor/Surprise
Hey, NotSirk, I've a question of life or death. Do Sabrina and Mabel have already blossomed into their adult selfs physically or as they still in this phase where they look like old kids but not yet teenagers ? Since you said in chapter 1 that Sabrina was three heads taller than Izzy, it got me thinking. Can e hope a chapter where Izzellah will actually have to resist not only Sabrina and Mabel's wishes to bond with her, but also her own lust after two two would have become sexy young adults ? I sure hope so ^^
Author's Response:
There still closer to kids then full adults. So's Riri for that matter although I imagine Riri's just a little older. Development wise even though their brains are more mature and MAJORS can grasp concepts like driving, and make sound decisions (when they're not trying to punch each others teeth out) they develop at a similar rate to minor humans until adulthood. The adult period lasts significantly longer though before they become elderly. MAJORS have close to double the lifespan of a minor.
Right now they're in that awkward between kid and teen phase which is why Izzy denies any physical attraction but they could hit full puberty at anytime. Although be warned. A MAJOR in the grasp of puberty is....excitable. Izzy might start drooling though if it ever happens.
And just because:
Izzellah 5'7
Peter 5'5
Lisa 6'8 (done growing for the most part)
Lee 6'0
Sabrina 7'4 (still growing)
Mabel 7'5 (Sabrina hates this)
Riri 7'7 (Sabrina doe not hate this)
Brenda 8'5 (Still a little short for a MAJOR more commen for a girl)
Gloria 9'0 (Pretty good for an old lady)
Mei 9'3 (Surprise!)
Rebecca 9'5 (Slightly above average for a MAJOR woman)
Braxton 10'1 (Mr. Average)
Darren 10'3 (Mr. Average's older, hotter brother)
Romeo 10'4
Ignacio 11' 5 (Officially classed tall goofball! I'll have to check this because I know I wrote his height in story)
Shannon ??? (An actual giantess?)
These are the working sizes I've written down. Might be subject to change.