Date: October 30 2018 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 12: Death of Hope
I’m really hoping we aren’t in the middle of another months long hiatus. You just got back. That would be sad.
Author's Response:
Not at all friend, check the review above you! Thanks for waiting!
[Report This]Date: October 11 2018 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 12: Death of Hope
Sorry for not reviewing last time. You always have a lot to tell in your responses, it makes the reviewing so much more interactive. I usually feel a bit guilty about not having more to tell.
Those guys kinda had it coming and Mira is right. They would have destroyed Mira and Anthony if Mira hadn't done anything. But I must admit that it must also have looked a bit scary how Mira handled the thugs. On the other hand, Anthony should maybe be a bit impressed about how protective Mira is of him.
The thought of loosing Anthony awakened something powerful within him.
And well, at least Anthony has some time now.
Also, thank you for writing!
Author's Response:
Please, friend, theres no reason to aplogize for not reviewing. I only asked for the first time in a while for it because it lets me know I'm on the right track, and followers of the story are enjoying themselves. I often, though I never like to admit, get self-conscious seeing some works doing so well with so few words actually written, either by comparison to my work, or indeed overall. I know I've essentially got my foot in two camps with this story, trying to appease my want/need to create a narrative, while also attempting to cover a subject matter most people are looking forward to being more direct, sexual, and short, but I can't help but enjoy doing it.
Also, "a bit scary?" Lol. I sometimes imagine what any of us would be like if placed into our fantasy, which we swear up and down we'd enjoy being a part, despite the sheer terror of the reality. Personally, if I watched my girlfriend do some of the things I've fantasized about, I'd probably be scared shitless!
Anyways, as always man, thanks for your review!
[Report This]Date: October 10 2018 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 12: Death of Hope
As expected, this was a very tough situation for Mira and Anthony's relationship. Him witnessing her kill them all, especially in the cold and uncaring way she did it, had to be really hard for him. What I didn't expect was her sudden change in demeanor aand retreat to her room. Hopefully Anthony can quickly correct her prognosis that their relationship is without saving and repair get past the cold exterior that has suddenly formed around her.
Though, I love the diety guy. I think you do a good job writing him, as a mysterious figure with unkown intentions who seems to have at least some care for Mira and Anthony, but at the same time has a bit of fun conversing with Anthony when he can. He provides a necesary outlet for some of Anthony's feelings when he can't express them to Mira.
I do wonder what Anthony will find in Mira's room. What is she hiding? Will him being in there backfire on his goal to salvage their relationship? This is so tense, I can't wait for next chapter!
Author's Response:
Its a situation I think no matter how long down the line, was bound to come up. Being faced with the reality of who someone is sometimes takes time. They may try to hide it, or maybe even lie to themselves about it ever existing, but in the end, you can't contain who you are inside. And while in this case things might be obvious, its always up to the individual to decide for themselves who they want to be.
And yes, I love the Black Demon. He's so easy for me to write by comparison to other characters. As I explained in an earlier comment, I, as well as most authors I'm sure, put a little bit of myself into everything I write. In the example of this story, he represents a side of me not often shwon to anyone else.
Thanks, as always, so much for reading and reviewing Kanto. It's people like you who honestly keep me writing and enjoying myself. This is all, in a part, possible because of you.
Date: October 10 2018 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 12: Death of Hope
Holy fuck, I really enjoyed this. The mood swings and the ending gave me chills! Love the demon though; he adds a whole new layer to the story! Keep up the amazing work!!!
Author's Response:
I love giving people a that awesome feeling! I tried very hard to capture a persona that I've always been in love with; cold, calculated, intimidating, but also, caring, gentle, and kind on rare occasion.
I also basically have inserted myself into this story in more ways than one, half of me is represented by Anthony, and the rest of me is poured into the Black Demon.
Thanks so much for taking the time to review the story again, friend!