Date: October 01 2018 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 11: Predator
Really, really well written chapter, especially at the end! You've got me really excited for the next ;)
Author's Response:
I'm always excited to keep writing! Personally, it makes me happy to write anything, but I know this is something I'm, "knowledgeable," about, and something I know for sure others can understand.
Thank you for your approval!
[Report This]Date: October 01 2018 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 11: Predator
I wasn’t expecting this. But good chapter. It’s an interesting situation. Anthony has always known Mira has murdered dozens, of not hundreds, of people, but he didn’t have to face that reality head on. He could assume that maybe she’s changing because of him. But now she just murdered 4 people right in front of him. I wonder how he’ll react once he gets another chance to speak with her.
Although she has changed a bit. At least she was apologetic (to him) about what she was about to do. But she was right, there really wasn’t any way for them to get out of that situation otherwise, with him about to shrink.
Author's Response:
I appreciate your compliment on the chapter!
I really want to make this more than just smut, and I know that sort of alienates a large demographic, but it's what I enjoy writing like and about. There's absolutely a LOT of stuff that's going to happen in the future, and rest assured my first shot at inappropriate writing will not be my last. But I just love conflict, resolution, and the journey of discovery.
...Also girls on a power trip...
...A whole lotta that...