Reviews For We Fall Together
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Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2018 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 10: Appetite

I really liked the chapter. It read away really well and it felt way shorter than it actually is.

Mira and Anthony are so cute together.

Thank you for writing!



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot, friend!

I enjoy the dynamic they both share a lot. It's simple really, I just write out what I would personally like to be a part of, as well as throw in things others might enjoy or make things more interesting! Thank you for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2018 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 10: Appetite

Yay! This story is back! I’m so glad. I had to go back and reread a bit of last chapter to re-orient myself with the story after so long. But anyway, this chapter picks up their relationship just fine. Something about the uncertainty and unpredictability of Mira is simultaneously hot, exhilarating, and terrifying at the same time, both for me, and I’m sure much more for Anthony. Anyway, interesting to see her taking him to bed. I do wonder how long it’ll be before they do it with him in his shrunken state, but I doubt she’d waste her first time with him when he’s not awake to be absolutely scared shitless.

I hope more updates come soon!

Author's Response:

*Screams internally to share story outline but resists the temptation to do so.*

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