Date: January 12 2018 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 9: Compatibility
I'm really glad you are still going this strong with this story. The introduction of a character who knows about Anthony and his situation is honestly very interesting as I mostly thought the story would be JUST mira and him. Now the mystery begins anew with Allison and as stated by the previous review, if this was a first attempt at lewd material then you get a strong A+ for effort man. Good luck for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: January 11 2018 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 9: Compatibility
Well, if that was your first time writing lewd content, I couldn't tell. I thought it worked very well. In any sort of romantic story I read, when it comes time for sexual scenes, my favorite type is when it's more about what each character is feeling for the other than about the actual physical pleasure. I mean, it's great to have the payoff of the physical arousal and eventual orgasm, but I always like to see those as offshoots of their feelings for each other. And in this chapter, I thought you were really able to pull that off. Mira was brought to climax not by her fingers, but by Anthony's words stimulating her emotions. And the fact that he got into it and had all those feelings swirling around inside himself helped as well.
Anyway, I loved it. I hope to eventually see more content like this, as the story, and their relationship, progress. Of course, I never want story sacrificed in order to make way for smut, but I'd totally enjoy more lewdness at points in the story where it will fit. I'm drawn to this site because of my unusual desires, but I keep coming back, checking every few hours for updates on my favorites stories, because authors like you put work into crafting narratives that work, with compelling characters and scenarios. Keep up the good work, man!