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Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2018 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 8: Shout at the Devil

Another great chapter! Super happy to be back from the hiatus and see one of my favorite stories being updated again.

Allison is an interesting addition to this story. Another demon perhaps? And this time one that’s has been living under Anthony’s nose for years. I wonder what her goals are. It’ll be interesting to see how this develops further.

But back to Anthony and Mira. Glad to see Mira seeing Anthony’s kid friendly side. But the real action is when they get home. Interesting to see how quick her attitude changes when he shrinks. Even though she has taken an interest in him as a man she can love, she still is still determined to keep him dominated and under her thumb, and to make sure as hell he knows it.

Hopefully Anthony can get past his terror and tell Mira what he knows: that Allison didn’t find him, she knew exactly where he was the whole time. They’re dealing with something at at least Mira’s level. More than getting Anthony off the hook, they both need to be aware of the gravity of this new threat.

I’m excited to see this story continue! Keep up the good work!

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