Reviews For We Fall Together
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Reviewer: MadHatter Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06 2017 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 5: Accidents Happen

Sorry for the late post, but I like this one a lot too. I like detailed stuff so you know i'm gonna enjoy it. I STILL do feel like the relationship is a bit fast, but it's not a bad thing really... it expidites the plot forward so that isn't a negative aspect.

Seeing the interactions and differences at both sizes is also fun really. I look forward to Mira's next "game" she uses him for next chapter probably lol, so good luck on the next one man!

Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed [Report This]
Date: November 03 2017 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 5: Accidents Happen

Love it! Seriously you are really good at writing. This whole scenario is just great. I love that Mira has feelings for him, but she still has a combination of playfulness and carelessness that will keep things eventful. It’s really cool that they have times where they can talk to each other equally sized, while it is inevitable that Mira will hold all the power half the time. This has rapidly become one of the stories that keeps me coming back everyday to check for updates, every few hours even. The 5-6 day wait time between chapters is gonna kill me...

Author's Response:

Thanks so much Kanto for your review! I appreciate your comment on my writing ability, it really makes me feel good, very special in fact! There's gonna be a lot more going on in the coming chapters. and I've quickly fallen in love with the characters and their interactions, it's my favorite part about writing the story! Thanks so much for your continued enjoyment, and I really can't wait to see what you think about future submissions to it!

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