Date: October 20 2017 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 3: Muderous Guilt
Another win man. If there is one thing I have to say about the story you are giving us, or to me at least, it's that you aren't throwing in mindless amounts of smut and such, but I STILL want to read all the details of whats going on, because with the way it's going, I imagine things will get a lot more interesting after this chapter really.
Like I said before though, definitely one of my "check every day for updates story" so I really hope the creative flow keeps going for you man!
Also, really think your strong suit right now is definitely slow character developement and that isn't a bad thing. Kinda reminds me of another authors stories I really liked, I think his name is sonicfan something, but he wrote some really good ones I liked to read cause they were more about the characters and a bit less about the fetish based stuff. It was great