[Report This]Date: October 15 2017 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 1: Decisions And Consequences
This is very well written! With such an exciting and engaging premise like this, I really hope you continue! Thanks for sharing :)
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I really want to make something that appeals more to just the obvious subject matter, and to a wider range of emotions! Thanks for taking the time tor review!
Date: October 11 2017 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 1: Decisions And Consequences
Wow I didn't expect that to happen.
I honestly thought it's going to be another boring tourchering story but you prove otherwise. It's hard to come by a good plot story is this site today and you seems to know how to do it right. Can't wait for more.
And by the way like, the black demon cherectar is so cool and horefing 😀
Author's Response:
I really enjoyed making the Black Demon, he'll have a lot more of a part to come as we go along, Thank you for reviewing and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
Date: October 10 2017 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: Decisions And Consequences
Well this was a rather well done beginning. Established characters, a breif look at both personalities and a great start to a potentially amazing story I think. You attention to detail is great, and the interactions done well too.
If you were looking for some approval, you can have mine man! I look forward to where this goes, especially if every chapter is this large lol