Date: November 15 2017 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 3
This chapter was amazing!
Love how momma just put the thong on with him tied to it. I am curious about which part of the thong that he is tied too. I think it's the ass part, but it wasn't clear to me. You said her hole, but which one?
In addition, Momma was getting dressed so I was wondering which clothes was she wearing to make his world go dark. Was it yoga pants, tight jeans, etc?
Karla likes to be kinky, toying with him and setting a trap like that and knowing that he is stuck with her mom.
Nice work on describing how the thong fits on each woman. On Karla, you said it was loose, and on Momma, it was a perfect fit, which probably meant that he was all snug up against her.
So the ribbon basically wrapped him up like a mummy, leaving only his face exposed. With his small size, Momma probably won't recognize him even if she held the thong right up to her face.
I like the bondage, tied up parts of this chapter. An idea that came up while reading about this was what if Momma mistakes the wrapped up guy as a sex toy?
Maybe Momma finds out about him, and decides to keep him in her panties. All tied up, of course.
Awesome chapter! I love the position this guy is in, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: It is the ass, maybe next chapter, and it is loose on Karla because she knew her momma was going to come in so she made sure it fit, and he is the thong basically so it would be panties in panties. Thank you for making such a in-depth response though
Date: October 10 2017 9:50 PM Title: Butts, boobs, bathrooms
Hmm. I did not expect the man to leave the fox. But since he is out, there are a lot more ways that these woman can use him.
Hmm. Could momma have a name? The girls can refer to her as momma, but when she handles the man, it might be better to have a name otherwise it sounds like this momma is his momma. Lol.
If Karla is the gross one, could "Momma" be the sexy one? Her thin body with wide hips just makes me desire to see more of her. I really wonder what she will think when she sees him.
Seems like Karla is determined to torture the guy. Hope he escapes before she finds him.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Itís staying momma
Date: October 10 2017 8:32 PM Title: Butts, boobs, bathrooms
LOL! Could it be that the more she walks her butt cheeks actually draw him in deeper and he gets mixed about within her unwiped butthole like a blender; which causes him to squirm and Karla realizes he's in her asscrack so she puts on a pair of t-backs or boy-shorts to lock him in place?
After a few days or weeks maybe she'll store him back in the fox only she keeps it-him in her boots or wears him like a panty liner.
Keep it coming!
Author's Response: The panty part gave me an idea for next chapter be ready
Date: October 10 2017 4:29 PM Title: The girls
I love the mother in the story. She uses the fox as a cushion and has some respect toward it. Also, she is the only one that seems sexy to me. Love the way she used her wide hips to flatten the fox.
Would the man leave the fox and be found by the mother? Maybe the mother is smart enough to find a man, and keep him to herself?
The mom is what keeps me interested in this story. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Got some mom in the new chapter
Date: October 10 2017 10:57 AM Title: The girls
The story has a lot of potential; but the aesthetically descriptive writing style makes it a bit confusing at points.
Curious to see where this story goes, especially if the goth girl realizes he's in the stuffed toy and keeps him in there, perhaps even glueing the zipper shut. She could stuff that stuffed animal in a lot of interesting places withing her clothing and shoes-boots.
Maybe the mother could find him, and she decides to keep him both in the stuffed fox and for herself.
Author's Response: Glad u see potential. And also Iím trying to keep this 99 percent unaware