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Reviewer: Sheograth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2017 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 4

This is a great story! You've done a great job with the unaware stuff, providing just enough detail. I also like how each chapter starts with a small reset.

I liked how you touched on how a shrunken person's body could be impacted by this kind of experience.

Keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward to what you do with the aware stuff moving forward.



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